Good work on this chapter.

What a great story. Thank you for writing and I really enjoy the spin you are giving it.

Aaah, I like the Hermione POV so much. Finally we see what a dunderhead Harry actually is. I mean who the hell rushes head first into all those kind of things? Having Hermione beeing the leader could work so well. It would have been fun having a 'Junior Inquisitor' kind of plot with a dark lady in training under the nose of the ministry, but well maybe a nice spin off would work. Still loving the story. Thanks so much!

What a special chapter. I really like the way this tale is going. Lupin is a bit dull, but the way the Grangers try to take their life into their own hands makes a lot of sense for such indendent people. I would actually expect them to try to get the hell out of Britain, or get some kind of independent knowledge from people outside of Dumbledore or the Ministry. I mean how low can a justice system fall, when your minor daughter is charged for defending herself and nobody cares about the attackers? Somewhere else this kind of crap was described as small-community politics. Usually small communities are checked on state or national level. This is completely missing magical Britain. So leaving seems to be the only option. Hermione just doesn't have the protection Harry has. There must be a way for international enrollment in such a prestigious school as Hogwarts... Ah well I kind of dabbled there, thank you for writing this story. Love it (even though that shit got my blood boiling...) I'm sooo looking forward to how Hermione gives Dumbles a good kicking.

I so did not see that coming. This got dark quickly. Did the Order of the burning chicken screw this one up? Would love having Hermione taking over and getting even with all those meddling wannabe dark or light leaders. Uuuh, Dark Lord Hermione and her sidekick/pet BWL (well at least publicly, what they do at home is their business)

I love the way you imagined the canon plot going without Hermione. I'm sure there are people complaining about Hermione beeing to powerful or such crap. But the parallels to Voldipants make a lot of sense and are just great. I was looking hard for a Hermione-centered story and this one really fits my wishes. Thank you so much!

Great story. You really got me hooked. I love the characters. Public and private face of Hermione are really something. Thank you very much!

Great story.

This is the first Harry Potter fic I've read for a few years, and I'm really enjoying it. Great chapter and good story so far.

interesting tale, I look forward to your next update. found this story on recommendation from a reddit thread

I am still perplexed nobody confronted them about what happened in the ministry and Harry never commented on her destructive way of dealing with the death eaters.

Hermione has such an abrasive personality in this fic. I am curious about the open war and what her role in it will be. I think a great story would be one in which Hermione found herself stuck in the past irreversibly during Tom's schooling years as of the beginning of fourth year, before she gets involved with Harry. As vicious and as brilliant as she is it would be great to see how she and Tom Riddle Jr would interact.

I very much like this take on Hermione.

Very interesting start to the story itself, throwing us into a very OOC version of Hermione in a way that makes sense.

Making the Death Eaters and Voldemort competent as well makes the story so much more likeable and believable. Bellatrix actually being deranged and unstable also was a nice touch, sitting in Azkaban longer than Sirius (by the way, Sirius is handled quite well).

But my biggest applause is that you somehow made Umbridge a more palatable character that's not just sadistically horrible. She's got actual drive in her character - still hate her, but now I actually understand.

Great storytelling. I'll be back to finish this.

poor Dolores,, not winning at all.

Its wonderful , waiting for the next update