Reviews for The Thing With Feathers
cpetrienm chapter 1 . 7/1/2017
So glad you're back! Your stories are amongst my favorites.
katemarriedabear chapter 1 . 6/30/2017
My face actually lit up when I saw that you had posted a new story! I am so excited to see where it leads. You've been my favorite fanfiction author since you were actively posting. So happy for your return!
Danikae27 chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
I like this where is it going and oh poor Draco all that hope and looking for her just for her to break his heart.
tina belle chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
hi - some constructive feedback - maybe make draco's character a little more Slytherin. Right now, it seems very Hufflepuff/gryffindor ish. like that point where you say that he 'suddenly realized' that the point behind the marriage law is blood superiority - it seems like something he would have realized on his own much much long ago. Albeit, this is just the first chapter so I don't really blame you for the characters seeming two dimensional right now- I feel like this is just something you should work on -No matter how friendly Draco is or how mature the characters have become, there will still be the syltherin - ness in him: The smugness it feels to know something others don't - never would have let Hermione point anything out to him about the case- he's not Ron or harry. Also, Slytherins tend to be rather closed off about heir feelings, or at least manipulative about them- he would have never been so blatant in saying ' what if... was in love with you... hypothetically'. That screams Hufflepuff. I'm sorry- I sound so critical- Its just Draco is my favourite character and it really makes or breaks a story if the characters are portrayed in lieu with their personalities. The lack of that very thing is what threw people off about the cursed child. I really think this is going to be a more original marriage law fit so I really want you to do well on it. Sorry if I sound negative
Martisz chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
I agree with what Hermione had done. And it's sad that Draco doesn't understand that her protest isn't about him.
I'm curious what will happen next.
lovelikehell chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
I love it! Can't wait for more! Hopefully, not in another 4 years! Hahaha.
fyeahtriz chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
I'm glad that you're back. I really love your previous works! Looking forward to this fic
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
Yay so glad you're back! Already loving this story and I'm eager to see what happens next. Thank you so much for your stories!
MsperfectlyMegs chapter 1 . 6/28/2017
such a good start! I'm sure, just like your others, that it will be amazing! can't wait to see what happens and I'm so glad that you've come back to give us more!
ScienceMama chapter 1 . 6/28/2017
Ooh, this was great and I'm excited to read more! Our Hermione is so self-righteous and stubborn; even when she has the moral high ground, her actions and that attitude can still hurt others. Poor he
zoesheppard chapter 1 . 6/28/2017
Oh, la la! Looking forward to reading more, thanks!
crookshanks the kitty chapter 1 . 6/28/2017
Welcome back! I love all your stories and I can already tell this one will be awesome!
Refictionista chapter 1 . 6/28/2017
You're back! I'm almost jumping up and down... and I love this take on a Marriage Law... Hermione with principles and she's sticking to them. LOVE IT. Give me more of this conscientious objector style of Hermione.
Fudgy Buddy chapter 1 . 6/28/2017
I'm a huge fan of your other stories. They really roped me onto the Dramione ship. Lots of fond memories of staying up late and being a zombie for the rest of the day. I'm so glad you're still writing and thank you for posting again!
Rkgrl32 chapter 1 . 6/28/2017
Amazing. I'm so glad you have posted another story! I reread your stories all the time.
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