Wow! Just... wow

This is sweet. Can't believe I wrote that. This is good! Thank you and good luck!

This is freaking awesome! A masterpeace! So far so good: deep and accurate character and world LORe, wide vocabulary! And the style...

Still hoping for an update to this one

You know you gotta drop this shit when Alex Mercer starts sparing people. Seriously, what the fuck? He kills all the guards, but the second he finds someone with actual information, it's back to asking questions? Braindead-ass take.

No se, mas o menos. tu es muy guapo!¡

oh good, i forgot there was a church. gross

oh, nowyou can be assed to be subtle.

jeez alex, did you not spec for stealth consuming?

terrible assassins, she shouldnever have woke upif they got that close.

bblargh. so frustrating, they get s completelyunique familiar summoning and are too busy playing politics to do anything but heap ridicule on a percieved lesser.

How this idiot was going to "use" him. She has no control over Alex. At all. And as he himself said, if he doesn't want to do something, he'll just say no. Her dilemma just doesn't make sense.

Stupid bitch

This is not alex mercer this is a self insert buddy alex is cruel and merciless and calculating this alex has none of those good luck with this story.

Thanks for the chapter~ it was great. I'd love to see more.