Reviews for Family Reunion 2
Anonymous Anon chapter 8 . 9/9/2011
Now don't get me wrong. I have no trouble with female Ranma being with a boy... but the way you wrote it in this story is just bad. Not only was the explanation (she is female so she likes boys) not make any sense since being female has nothing to do with what gender you like. Your sexual preference has to do with cultural upbringing so since female Ranma had male Ranma's memories she really shouldn't have just gone out and said "ewww I'm not a lesbo". No, her hormones affecting her body should have happened over a long period of time and she should have questioned them. What you have in this version of female Ranma isn't a female Ranma at all... she is just some random character that makes no sense. Which brings up another problem. "just some random character". Why do you feel the urge to pair the spares? Even if Ranma and Ryoga could make a nice couple they simply do NOT work in this fanfic. They just seem awkward and wrong. IN the manga female Ranma has more lustful reaction to KUNOU then she has had to Ryoga (if you don't count he koi rod incident) so her just liking Ryouga? Just like that? No, if you wanted to bring out a female Ranma you should have done so but not rushed into pairing her off with somebody. I mean there ARE characters that can have perfectly fun without having a sex partner or being "in love". Now if you HAD to pair her off with somebody, why not the male Ranma? that would have made more sense. But no, you even used that dumb name "Ranko" why would a female Ranma want to be associated with a fake name that she used to hide herself from her mother? IF anything she should hate that name... And they just see each other as a brother and sister? just like that? The narcissist Ranma? As long as neither of them tried to push their attention onto the other one they should logically be attracted towards each other naturally. So yeah... you should have Ryoga die in the beginning of "family Reunion 3" have him get run over by a buss or something before he can do something disgusting towards "Ranko".
gort420 chapter 8 . 7/29/2011
I just reread family reunion 2 bringing evangelion sounds like a fantastic idea for a fic I hope your working on it.
Mad Elf chapter 3 . 7/23/2007
A pretty good story *almost* completely ruined by atrocious use of language. Fair enough, getting tenses and vocabulary use correct can be hard if English isn't your first tongue, but there is absolutely *no* excuse for mis-spelling proper names (Rubeus HAGRID being the most obvious - but not the only - example; in fact you made a total hash of pretty much the entire Hogwarts section.).
Innortal chapter 8 . 3/21/2006
Great job, looking forward to more.
JSB chapter 8 . 4/1/2005
Wow both of these were really good, If you are going through with the next sequel, that would be extremely awesome. I loved how you had them have the more than 1 fiancee thing, cept I'd rather not have Kodachi as one of them. Me I'm a Ryoga fan and I'm very happy you brought him back in as opposed to him being an asshole. This Was really good and I hope you do make a sequel.
Viper chapter 8 . 6/18/2004
All I can say for the gang is 'OH SHIT!'
dogbertcarroll chapter 8 . 6/7/2004
Interesting twist at the end there.
Jerry Unipeg chapter 8 . 6/4/2004
GREAT CHAPTER! I see one mistake, the fifth head is a white dragon and it use a cone of cold.
Jerry Unipeg chapter 7 . 6/4/2004
andrew chapter 8 . 6/4/2004
I just loved this story. it was great. I'm so glad that you finally finished it. it was a great ending.
The One above All chapter 8 . 6/4/2004
wow great story. is there gonna be a evangelion tie in? and will we see kun lao again?
the DragonBard chapter 8 . 6/4/2004

One question:


I could see Ranko as being her, I could even see Akane, or Nabiki, but KASUMI?
dennisud chapter 8 . 6/4/2004
Wow a very exiting and surprising ending.

Not only do they deal with Kun-Lao, they also deal with a devil in carnate gosddess as well.

But if Gendo is Kun-Lao's new host and FR-3 isn't a sequel where will this go?

Great story either way.

Mortanius chapter 8 . 6/4/2004
Paladine cannot banish Taky because of the fragile nature of Krynn's balance. Tiamat is another story. Further more, if you are using 2ed cosmology, Takhisis and Tiamat live in Avernus, First Layer of the Nine Hells of Baator. Even more, gods can only be destroyed by other gods. Dragon Slave wouldn't tickle the Dark Queen who was a Greater Goddess with 18 Divine Ranks. The Faerunian gods of darkness; ie. Bane, Velsharoon, Shar, etc are more suitable for the role. With their salient divine abilities, Ranma wouldn't even come close to scratching even a Demigod!
Sonic 1 chapter 1 . 4/29/2004
Writers block still?
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