That was rough. Who breaks up with someone at Disney land?

Totally in! I love a story set in Disneyland, a place that I know and have known well since I was a child. The T-shirts are a great plot device.

Maybe this was coming for Jasper anyway. Nine years and they don't advance their relationship! I can't wait to hear Edward's story and for him to meet Bella.

Interesting!

Wow! Jasper is really an ass! Poor Bella!

I want torment and pain to be inflicted on Jasper. What a complete tosser. Other than that, fantastic start! Can't wait to read more :-D

Adulting hurts sometimes . A big load of crap was just dumped on Bella. Jasperthought he would keep it from her, but then his life took a 90 turn and he realized he was keeping it from both of them and somebody had to stand up and do it. At least he didn't take her inside the park to do it that would be too cruel!
R. Who can't go to Disneyland now forseveral weeks is my pass is not valid until later in August. ;-/

I cannot wait to meet Edward and a brilliant start to another of your fabulous fic s xxx

Aww... poor Bella... she should go to toon town ... I'm at Disneyland right now

I hope there's not a huuuge age difference between Edward and Bella! Please don't break my heart.

Love it! That was kind of a dick move for him to do this to her in such a beloved place of hers. But, me thinks she'll be moving on to bigger and better things. Can't wait for more!

Oh, yea. Keep this one going...so - does she meet Edward in the park? And actually, Jasper makes a lot of sense, but his delivery and timing really suck - lol!

This has great potential!

Don't leave us hanging! Really excited to learn more.
Love where this story is going.