Reviews for The Betrayal
Guest chapter 11 . 3/22
It should gave been Teddy not Arielle.
Munkeyfump20 chapter 40 . 11/18/2019
Wow thanks for the very good read.
Guest chapter 8 . 10/12/2019
I actually feel so offended by what grace said to Ana
Guest chapter 7 . 10/2/2019
Omg I'm loving this story I haven't stopped crying .
Ms MMS chapter 7 . 8/28/2019
I think Ana has to leave. The fact t that Christian has no intention of giving up Elena ‘he just has to hide it better’ saysit all. He loves himself and thinks he ownsAna. Telling her in counseling that making a decision together is wrong , that sometimes someone has to take control, and that someone is him proves everything.

All of this and it doesn’t even all of the other duplicitous things he’s done, to Kate, to José, being in contact with Leila, as always he is a spoiled adolescent who wats his own way. I hope he can change because he is the one who is so terribly wrong.
P.Self chapter 32 . 7/21/2019
Should have left the lemons in.
SMEADE chapter 1 . 7/5/2019
I’ve read all 40 chapters and for a while wasn’t happy with Christian still being friends with Elena and betraying Ana by lying to her about wanting children and then admitting he didn’t. Having a vasectomy without telling her was so dishonest in a relationship from someone you trust completely fall apart quickly. I kept reading because I was curious to see how you were going to get these two people who loved each other back together again. You did a great job in getting everyone in the Grey family back together and happy with lots of children. I was okay with Elena never coming back to hurt anyone. Good read.
Donna Marie1 chapter 9 . 6/5/2019
What the hell He can’t leave her like that
Linda Dockery chapter 40 . 6/4/2019
Oh my goodness I so love a happy ending mercy all these kids and now Christian takking about another one oh my gracious well maybe they will never know and yes Ana did save him by fighting about a baby
Good riddance to bad rubbish as in Imposter John Flynn
Well damn Kate the bitch don't think she will live to see parole but come to think of it with her fighting all the time and damn getting pregnant and taking the baby's life in her own hands trying to abort it hell maybe she should have died and saved the tax payers some money
Amazing story loved it love how your mind works. What we can do with our imagination is boundless keep up the fantastic work
Thanks for sharing and I just found you and your amazing stories a few days ago
Linda Dockery chapter 39 . 6/4/2019
HELL YEAH the BITCH got life she is so fuckin crazy that she thought they would let her walk out of there yeah she lost big time had a wonderful man 3 beautiful children had it made and fucked it up by trying to kill her best friend and unborn baby cause she was so obsessed with Christian cause he rejected her oh well I would say get a life Kate but you ain't gotta worry about that cause you can bet your bottom dollar you won't ever see the outside again. Elliot has a new wife and Kate can't stand it cause he went from someone like her to the nanny but Kate needs to realize that Cadie loved him and those children for them not for what Elliot can give her and he gives her the only thing she wants is his love. So long to bad rubbish
Christian is silly about the baby being a boy cause he hides his junk but dang if they didn't have a little boy love the name so happy for them
Linda Dockery chapter 38 . 6/4/2019
Awesome and like Ana said when she was ready she would come and talk to Elliot hopefully Elliot won't run his big mouth again cause I damn know for sure that Cadie will leave his ass.
Oh my goodness how the hell is Kate gonna handle this if she finds out ? Oh gonna be so much fun to put the bitch in her place cause Kate the bitch is going down
Linda Dockery chapter 37 . 6/4/2019
Well Ava got her fairy costume Cadie made it how sweet
Elliot heard them on Skype and wanted to talk to her but as Ana said give her time
Christian tried to help but Cadie knows what she wants but Elliot I believe is still on the fence
Linda Dockery chapter 36 . 6/4/2019
Hell yeah Elliot will get his girl back damn not only daddy got a lick or two in so did her brothers and Elliot was smiling like a loon he knows she loves him too but yes he needs to grow up fuck he's 38 yrs old not a kid anymore
Now he just needs to spend a few minutes with her with the help from Christian's guy Welch
Linda Dockery chapter 35 . 6/4/2019
Hot damn a new little Grey on the way happy, happy now are they going to get married again?
Elliot is so damn stupid Cadie should have slapped him and walked away
Yeah figures Christian gets him to open up and say he loves her that's all Christian wanted to hear but Ana was already to smack him
Ok Christian talk some sense into your bro
Linda Dockery chapter 34 . 6/4/2019
Well Elliot can't keep his hands or his dick to himself mom and dad know now and Ana also. Ana knows Cadie is right for Elliot he just has to figure it out for himself
Oh yeah I do believe that there will be the pitter patter of little footsteps would love a brother or sister for Arielle so sweet
Ok let's get to the trial of Flynn send him to prison for what he has done to Christian
Let's see what's going to happen with bitch Kate they should say after her evaluation that she is sane and fit to stand trial
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