|Reviews for What You Leave Behind Trilogy|
| Laseri chapter 2 . 7/15/2004
What on earth were you thinking? How old are the girls meant to be in part 2? I know I said the last fic of yours I read was good, and it *was* an interesting idea, but this one was really not what I expected. Sorry to flame, but try to develop your writing skills more before you attempt chapter 3.
| Seer99999 chapter 2 . 3/29/2003
This was a great story.
When I was little I use to always watch Ocean Girl.
Keep on writing more great stories.
| Emily chapter 2 . 3/17/2003
Very cool. Keep writing.
| hanh chapter 1 . 3/6/2003
i like your story but things happen way too quickly and you dont really get into detail but i like the nari/ jason romance i love them together they are so cute anyways keep up the good work and please update soon i want to know what else happens in the story