The whole Jon speaking with Drogon with their minds, whom somehow abandoned Daenerys to the Dothraki and then traveled to The Wall for Jon, is not doing it for me. Good luck to your story, though.

Dany is just half a dragon. Will she ever learn to communicate ?

Men ! ( huffing in exasperation ) a sensible person would want food and a bath.! Leave it to a man to think with his small head.

Great chapter! Can't wait to see more! :)

Really good can't wait for more! :)

very good sample

A stark naked Stark riding a dragon must be quite a sight!

This story is interesting, but I think you should improve a little more, make an edition that has many spelling errors (and that I do not write well, because I am still learning English) but you should extend the paragraphs more deeply, further deepen the psyche of the characters, be more descriptive of situations and narrate the plot better in a more fluid, I do not know if you understand me. you have a decent story that could improve, I liked the last episode and that Jon finally met Dany in Meeren, which is always something I wanted to read, "King of Meeren" I like that xD ... although you should go deeper but as Jon rules a city he does not know and why people would choose him. I also like how you made Jon take the shit out of Daario, which I personally detest, I hope Dany will leave and stay with Jon, who if he values her for what is as a woman and a person, and not as a queen ... awaiting the next episode.

did you delete a chapter?

another great chapter

Can't wait for more! :)

Loved Dany's thoughts about Jon. Also can't wait to see her reaction to him freeing the dragons. Will he tell her of his bond with Drogon? And will Rhaegal take Jon as his rider despite it?

very good new chapter

This is...interesting at the least. Kind of a lot of crazy shit going on at once but I want to see where it's going. Arya finding Jon should be good though. Update soon!

Great chapter! Can't wait for more! :)