His eyes are gray by the why. Why label it a asoiaf when you have jon described as got jon. Also please capitalize your sentence's.

Ooooooo Jon go "borrow" one of the Dragons and go get Sansa and Theon.

Nice story, can't wait for the next chapter.

I really like this! Can't wait to see more! :)

Great update and cant wait to see what will come next.

Great story so far

So exciting!

wow this is truly amazing and I look forward to seeing what is going to happen next. Keep up the good work.

loved it

I really enjoy reading this story and cant wait to read more.

An ice dragon has taken control of Drogon? I hope that's simply a vision of what can happen in the future...and not happening while Jon is with him!

Interesting that he was so far away that he felt Jon needed him. I hope he gets back to his mother soon.

Hmm, it's an interesting take but you need to work on the layout, sometimes it's impossible to decide what is thought and what is speech.

Also, they don't rape the wives of fallen khals.

Interesting start

Drogon felt him and flew all the way to the Wall? Awesome dragon!