Loved it! Def a favorite story for me!

old bastard

So miss morals is not only not saying anything about Ginny having sex at 13 but was also having sex with her. Not only without issue but even before her research was considering talking Harry into bringing her in.

Now beyond that not only is she considering more girls for his sake but seems eager and has been hooking up with Daphne as well if not more girls sleeping around.

The big kicker with her supposedly loving him and having told him just the other day she was going to be faithful to him on the night of his bday. She had apparently not only invited girls but guys as well to potentially add to this coven for future orgies to screw her and the other girls aside from Harry.

So crude version. Earlier in the day before her declaration she was planning and eyeing potential guys to cuck him with. Which in a coven wouldn't be a one time thing.

Also don't sex rituals tend to involve virginity? Yet she gave it away despite her plans. Though with 13 yr old Ginny already losing hers and Hermiones relationship hints I'm getting doubts despite how young that there will be girls who haven't lost it by now his age.

I'm not liking this seeming free for all Hermione. Harry's lack of a reaction to her speaking of scouting guys to share her and other girls with is epic tier bs with his repeated showing of self worth and other issues.

Unoleasant chapter and bad in regards to his lack of reactions.

Rv

Beautiful writing.

I don't understand why Harry was fined. Well, he's just a halfblood. As is his "victim", though. But Umbridge was lawfully convicted and was to be sent to Azkaban. She tried to escape lawful detention. As per Fudge's customs, there's only one acceptable answer, the Dementor's kiss. Of course, Dumbledore would preach forgiveness and plead for clemency, but that's what should happen. That Harry prevented a criminal's escape should be lauded, no matter if she's executed with a couple bruises or worse. But if she's not kissed, she should at least get ten extra years, high security, and no chance of parole. Or something like that.

A wonderful, gripping story that stopped me doing any work on the house while I read it. Although some parts were Erotic I would class the story as a true reflection of LIFE with all its aspects. Fictional, true, but nonetheless as real as it could get.

I don't know why Harry should have that reaction about the attack on Daphne not going to a full Wizengamot trial. The incident with the dementors didn't happen in this story as he was with the Grangers for the summer, not at Privet Drive.

Tremendous!
It's about 75% of the story I've just started outlining, so naturally I list this in my top 10 favorite stories!

Na ja, Harry könnte doch um ein privates Zimmer bitten. Dann könnte Hermine sich ihm anschließen.

Nr

Sooo…

This is the second time I read through this fanfiction, and the second time I enjoy it quite a lot.

However, I feel like there are a few things I would like to point out regarding economicsThe bride prices agreed (5k galleons) are actually quite low in practice compared to high nobility 19th century’s uses. Bride prices tended to be 2.2 times higher than the dowry, and a typical dowry could well reach above 70k pounds at the time (i.e. converting without taking inflation really into account). On top of that, the repartition for dowries was much more split, and it would make sense bride prices followed, i.e. if the median is around 3.5-4k galleons, you wouldn’t be in the rare category before at least 6-7k galleons.

There is also the absence of dowry, though that could be due to other marriage agreements. Dowries were a way for parents to ensure the future of their girls, as they would keep the dowry even after divorce if needed.

Finally, there is the question of the rings cost. Harry owns 2 million galleons, and for all rings, spent 100k galleons. That is a lot of money, sure.

Just once again not as exceptional as you are trying to make it pass as. Good investments would have brought him far more dividends than that over the year, and it would maybe represent 1/2 months of dividends. Single gem jewellery can easily reach 100k, even without going through a physical store and custom designs. Factoring in the multiple gems and custom designs, I would expect closer to a million per ring than 300k.

And I would be quite disappointed if, in Harry’s place, I had mollified my brides’parents by such a simple offering. The bridal discretary accounts are, after all, worth much more and more indicative of trust. Passed a certain amount of money, such gifts don’t mean anything…

Cn

How did Ginny floo to Grimmauld when she didn’t know the secret?
Also why couldn’t Sirius have gone with them to Potter Cay? They went by private portkey from the Ganger residence.

I have enjoyed this story several times, but in reading Chapter 8 again, a minor nit popped up into the grey matter sometimes laughingly called my brain.

Anyway, you describe the Cay as being in the Caribbean or surrounded by Caribbean waters. This is not truly correct. The Caribbean is bounded by the Greater Antilles, Lessor Antilles, South and Central America and the Southern Yucatan coast of Mexico. The Bahamas are actually considered still within the Atlantic Ocean. It is not a big deal, and that the Bahamas is grouped with Grtr & Lssr Antilles as "West Indies" also causes some confusion as the West Indies is often equated as "Caribbean".