Reviews for The Right Thing To Do |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for this wonderful story. I'm late to the party but I thoroughly enjoyed the ride. It was oh so clever and I got really invested in it. Had you published it in a book format, I would've called it a real page turner! Fantastic read, thank you again! |
![]() ![]() EXCELLENTLY ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLY AMAZINGLY WONDERFULLY TERRIFICLY SPLENDIDLY AWESOMELY BLOODY INCREDIBLE THE ENDING WAS! I. LOVE. IT! SO FUNNY! |
![]() ![]() omg just finished chapter 28 and OMG IT'S THE KISS I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SINCE CHAPTER 1! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked your story although Hermione is different in my mind Can't wait to read your other work ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I love this ending ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit! That ending was badass! |
![]() ![]() Oh, dear. I simply enjoyed every god damned minute of reading this. Just thank You! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow… I could not stop! Loved it. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Chatting, smiling, perfecting.” Genious but of writing. Oh poor Hermione! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! Narcissa was an absolute gem! She was my favorite. Draco was Draco, but mostly in a good way. The key difference that his fixation on Hermione came to fruition in the realization early on that he loved her. It certainly took a long time for him to pursue her though! Hermione was a typical insecure and frumpy diamond in the rough. The cliche not quite ugly duckling turning into a graceful swan story. Lemons were well written. |
![]() ![]() I had thought this was great until I was told and realized myself most of this was edited paragraphs from others works! Fucking bitch tricked me ! |
![]() ![]() This was amazing. New favorite fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() "entry-level" needed a hyphen. "dimwits" does not need a hyphen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg this is my favorite dramione ever! I laughted and cried, your writing is truly amazing! Thanks thanks thanks for share this story with us 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting start. I have mixed feelings about the writing. I should clarify though. I think that the grammar and all that was absolutely fine. I also believe your summary and the first half of the chapter were great. There was just something about the latter half of the chapter. Unfortunately, I can't quite put my finger on it. Perhaps it was Hermione's arrogance that just rubbed me the wrong way? I'll have to read a bit more to pin it down but overall, I'd say you've done a bangup job, well done! |