good story. like the team.

Story about Naruto with a slight twist, has plenty of action and suspense.
Story needs some updates to bring story up to date.

I love it

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! pleeeeaaaaaassssseeeeeeee!

Please update, this is so good

I miss this story I keep rereading it

love this story it just suckede in and would not let me go... hope u haven't given up on this story cause i can't wait to read more

Wawww j'adore cette histoire mais je suis plutôt déçue que ça finisse en cliffanger, j'espère vraiment que vous pourrez la mettre a jour ...

eh sucks

Wtf, Itachi is still in the village!? And raising Sasuke!

This is really weird

It's a shame that this hasn't updated. It's premise was interesting and it was written well enough. Maybe it'll continue one day? Oh well

im ganna cry- scratch that i am crying

naruto was 3-5 when he left the orphanage

A good story worth reading even if it is incomplete. Naruto is different from canon but in a way that feels natural. The team is more powerful than in canon at this time but not overpowered. They are impressive for Genin and maybe Chuunin but not reading to beat every threat in the show with ease. Overall solid story with great moments.

I hope this will update some point