Reviews for Can You See Me Now? |
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![]() ![]() This is so damn well written. Love how the story develops. Keep up the good work man, it's epic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not really sure how Ibiki is expecting the genin to just come to him with everything and show off what they're doing when he keeps them at an arm's length away most of the time and is fairly blatant with his preference for his job with T&I. Maybe this mission will change that for them without things going belly up. Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this way of doing things. slow and steady wins the race. i understand why everything was action in the MANGA & ANIME , but it's highly unrealistic. i think if the MANGA & ANIME had more training & the events were more spread out , it would have been better. so i enjoy what you are doing. one of the things that pissed off in the MANGA & ANIME was the fact that NARUTO was never made a CHUNIN before the WAR ARC , NARUTO saved more VILLAGES , ROYALTY & PEOPLE than any other character in the MANGA & ANIME & yet it was never good enough for a promotion , NARUTO beat PEIN / NAGATO and asked him to resurrect the dead & he did it. anyway Update SOON |
![]() ![]() ![]() you are amazing at writing stories. this one especially. good work and stay updating |
![]() ![]() Starting reading story last night hard to let go. Story had plenty of action and suspense (a little humor here and their). I like how this team was setup and trained (plenty of suspense and excitement). Hope to see some interaction with the opposite sex/romance coming up. |
![]() ![]() This is such an awesome update! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() SNEAKY BOIS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stop hitting me in the feels dammit . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Manly tears... the manliest of tears... You saw NOTHING, you hear me? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed reading this story. Keep up the fantastic work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can just feel something is going to go wrong. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter! Gosh, I simply can't get enough of this trio... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not surprising that they heard about the C-rank abnormalities and want to try and prepare for them. I'm just happy Ibiki seemed to think along the same lines. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good chapter, Ibiki is getting them ready for this was one of the best parts. Now I'm looking forward to what mission they get, if you go with Tazuna, or give them something completly new. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thought Naruto could do something like a reverse Hirashin. Instead of appearing next to someone with the mark, they appear next to him, or switch places with a clone he makes. Just a thought for the future. Also, can you put the remarks of characters on the same line as their dialogue? Don't know about anyone else, but it confuses me as to who is talking when the giveaways are on different lines/paragraphs. Thanks for the interesting read! |