Reviews for Can You See Me Now? |
---|
![]() ![]() I thought this was dead. The sheer joy I found, when I discovered it's not dead is undescribable. Keep up the amazing work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the new chapter! Excited to see their upcoming C rank. |
![]() ![]() ![]() is it wrong that I can see Naruto's new persona to be very similar to Batman's catwoman, maybe it's cause of my slight want for the Sexy no Jutsu to be taken more serious, that and reading FTDS's Naruto the cat guy(just title not the story). Honestly I think it could work, if nothing else it's a plot-bunny |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this |
![]() ![]() ![]() HI DarthGumdrop, welcome back. I really like this story and was saddened by the long wait and thought you had abandoned it. Sorry for all you went through, and I'm really glad that everything is okay for now. This genin team is really fascinating. Thanks for all the time you spent with the game. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A really exciting chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep it up man great work love detail and understand psychology. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I gotta say the constant POV changes mid-sentence are incredibly jarring and unnecessary. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The chapter was good, there were a few minor typing errors, but nothing that really broke the reading flow. The only thing that confused me a bit was when Ibiki was becoming accustomed "to his team's round robin method", but only because I didn't hear that one before. The infomation about the security was interesting and how Ibiki is analysing his team and their inner structure. Their ignorance what it's that is bothering Izumo so much was kind of funny, but it shows how far they're compared to their peers. I'm happy to see that they will consult Ibiki about the personas that they should take up. I think I will need to read some parts of the story anew, I forgot their training level with the break you had between the chapters, only roughly remember it, but the story is worth that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, has it really been that long. And you've weathered qiute a bit. But you are still here and in today's world that' a huge thing! Oh man, those kids are just looking to get Ibiki in trouble! From the secrets they are keeping from him, and the things other people are picking up? Boy is he gonna be either incredibly anger or amazed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so happy you r back been waiting for this with bated breath! I have been terrified you were going to discontinue this amazing fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I hope you're doing alright and school is going well. Hopefully you can update soon, since i really do love this fic and have re- read it multiple times! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just wanted to say that I love your story and hope you continue writing |