Huzzah! This chapter was awesome, just like all the others. I hope you update soon because I can't wait to see the rest of the story. (Also the Jonins' reactions to Naruto because I have a good feeling that they're gonna be funny)

wow, I like this naruto, sure he is a bit skittish for my liking but I am looking forward to see how he grows in this.

Hope to read more soon. :)

I hope that 3 of the smartest people in the village noticed Naruto can't do the Clone Jutsu BC he has to much Chakra and instead teaches him the Shadow Clone... If he could learn it by the end of the week then he passes, he surprises Ibiki when instead of going back to the Academy at the end of the week to do the Shadow Clone he shows up at the very hidden T&I department that's in the same block as the Andu headquarters gets pasts the guards and waits in Ibiki's office for the man to get to work so he can prove to everyone that Naruto Uzumaki is ready to be a ninja... And then ask about ninja housing and extra solo mission for more money.

Oh dear... poor Naruto...I see where him doing his best will go. Poor love. I love this though! hope for more soon

Lovely, i can't wait for more!

I love an actual CAPABLE Naruto story, whether he has outside interference or not, just...I love the anime, but damn, was Naruto an idiot, lovable idiot, but still an idiot.

And i complete understand him starting out by downplaying his abilities, it'd be easier as a "pathetic stupid and useless demon" than being a "capable extremely smart and talented demon".

Interesting story you've got here! I look forward to reading more and figure out just what the ino-shika-cho trio plan to do to help Naruto. :D
Also, I personally like longer chapters, though I know how difficult that can be. So just do what you can! :D

yaaayyyyy! another awesome chapter! Sasuke and Naruto's fight is gonna be cool, I bet! asdgsgafabvsshsbsg this is just an awesome fic I can't wait until you update again!

I have enjoyed what I have read and have several pieces of advice for you, if you would humor me.

The first part of any piece of work is called the hook. The hook is what snares readers and allowed them to be engaged long enough to get caught up in the story. Read your first chapter out loud. You may notice that you have a lot of syllable stops that make the flow of the story sound unnatural.

Flow is like a constantly moving wave. When you read, you hear words in your own voice as the story is vocalized. When a reader gets successfully hooked, they no longer hear their own voice and instead, are swept up in the current of the story. Naturally, that means good stories also make beautiful pieces for oration.
Your hook needs to flow together a little better. Once you got past the small stuff and started to get to your actual content, the flow of your words became much more natural. Your characterization and the feeling of anxiety and tension is absolutely overwhelming and sets a good tone for the scene! You have an utterly interesting read and I really look forward to the next chapter! If you can master flow you WILL have a story that will grab the attention of hundreds of readers. That I promise. :) Keep working at it!

I really liked this chapter, especially with the different graduation exam. Though you may want to put a divider between POV'S or scene changes. I do like the length of the chapters, not too short but a quick and easy read. Also, 30 pages? Wow! The notion of a set update us definitely a good idea. I can't wait until you update again!

I'm really enjoying it so far. The more consistant style of uploading would be preferable, but maybe release more frequently to start with. Keep up the amazing work! :D

What an amazing start! This fic definitely has a lot if potential, so don't waste it! I really like this idea of Naruto hiding things from Iruka. A lot of other fics overdo the wholetraining and studying in secret' thing, but this is pretty mild. I can't wait until you update again!