Inbreeding not having adverse effect? Madness is an adverse effect.

I like your write more...

well

It could be better.

Love it

I really hope either you continue this or this gets adopted. But where are the factions of the Reapers, Skirmishers, and Templars? They would definitely change the scale of any engagement they're in. Hope to see this continued in some form.

*Whistles* Wowsers! I love it and I'll wait to see the next chapter for XCOM fighting in future conflict.

This has been a really good story so far. Can't wait for more!

Awesome start so far, I definatly want to see more

This is an idea that's certainly worth looking into...go for it.

Wowsers!

Moar ! It's interesting.

I like where this is going. Especially if your going to save some of the original characters of author. You and I both know how fucked up the author is. There won't be any chance of a happy ending. Your novel can change my perspective of that. Please continue.

i would love more in the same style as this and more on how the primitive people view them at least the ones that some how survived them

So, first, why the hell would they rebuild their civilization on a freaking island chain? Sothoryos, Ulthos or even some other land found through areal/satellite reconnaissance make more sense than this.

Secondly why the hell would they store money in the Iron Bank? Gold is a useful material in electronics and it's much safer wit them than some Medieval bank, which is the point of a bank. It's not like you can withdraw money from nonexistent branches across Westeros and Essos.

Thirdly, why involve themselves in some idiotic succession crisis, they've got bigger fishes to fry like rebuilding a mid to late stage Type I civilization.