Okay...Could...you...be...so...kind...as...to...bless...us...with...an...update...?

Some. Of. Them. Tasted. Salty.

Gay quote of the year

This story is both good and bad. I do understand why it's so popular and why a lot of people like this. Some things are really great. I really wanted to like this. You had me in the beginning but I slowly started to get less interested. There are things that could turn one off while reading this.

In the beginning the emotions felt reasonable and realistic but it changes the further one get into the story. Harry and Draco acting darker still felt realistic, it felt like you were exploring things about them that was unexplored by Rowling. But also they're sometimes out of character, and others too. They were also in character, but it kept going back and forth between out and in character. There's also the conflict. Some of it was really good but got a bit forced after a while. Watching the trio fighting over similar things and being terrible towards each other over and over again wasn't that great. Harry being close to them but then very suddenly cruel. Hermione being her normal nerdy self and then a massive cheater; the Hermione/Ginny relationship isn't very touched upon and it's just really messy. It makes everyone look quite bad. Ron was great until he suddenly wasn't. Went from nice, loyal, friendly Ron to a violent jerk who throws homophobic slurs left and right. He previously was cool about it and said he wasn't homophobic but I guess he was wrong. Everyone just keeps being shitty torwards each other. Draco has now also a baby sister. Some like the idea, others do not. Goyle likes older men. Filch. The ideas were good but the plot is spiraling out of control. Draco's mission or scheme to use Harry to make him love him and then giving him to Voldemort wasn't a bad idea. It was good and it could've been great.

I'm sorry. I don't really write anything but positive comments and I probably shouldn't have written it but I wanted to do it for people who are reading reviews before deciding to read a story. I wanted them to know so they could decide for themselves. Everyone likes things differently and a lot of people like this. But some people wants to know some thoughts of others before reading a fanfic (including me). Hate comments that are just cruel and un-detailed are just unhelpful and unneeded. My goal is not to be cruel and to shit on someones writing. I did also partly like this. I wanted to be helpful towards future readers. I hope I made myself understood. Also, to anyone who reads this comment: don't make my thoughts ruin your will to read this if you want to. Choose for yourself. There are also a lot of more positive comments. So there's a lot to take into account. I could also be wrong. Once again: everyone thinks differently.

So was a comment regarding the writer of this having passed away true? I didn't read this for the longest time because of that. If it is true has anyone else picked up the story where it left off? Or thought about it?

No, I will thank you, and the worst you'll get out of me is rictusempra, the best being a cheering charm.

Did a little digging and unfortunately this story will never be updated, at least by the author.

He has passed away.

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omg i love this fic! it's so good i read it every day as my bed time story it's sooooo hot and sexy omg i love draco and harry pls continue omg #333333333333#3 when do they have sax omg!1!

Does NOBODY finisher stories nowadays. I know you guys wrote them a couple years back, but still. I WOULD like to know the ending.
-Scrappy2017

Also not really feeling a homophobic Ron. Realistic but displeasing lol.

Okay honey what the fuck. How can you keave it at a CLIFFHANGER?! Update please!

TBC?
At the last chapter? Really? I was seriously hooked! I find the characters extremely interesting, and the relationship portrayed here with Harry and Draco, well, interesting as well!
To be honest, I'm not much of a fan of the Harry Potter Series, having never gotten the chance to read or watch the movies, but I have a very strong feeling that such is soon about to change.
I merely wandered into this fanfiction, for the writing style was recommended to me, I did not ever expect to find it so interesting.
Congratulations, you just made another fan...
One who will be expecting an update soon enough...

Eh.. Author-chan? Where are you? You don't seem the type to leave something undone... Yet this story hasn't been updated in twelve years! How?! Are you okay? Are you dead? You're not dead, are you? Don't be dead!

Harry! You can't just do that! Aren't supposed to be learning how to stop the Dark Lord?!
Ugh, boys...

When did Tom Riddle write a book, anyhow? And who did he get to publish it? So many questions... *sighs* Oh, well. Until next time.

Oh my gosh! Please continue this story! I love it so much so far and I'd hate to never get to read the end!

Harry being disturbed by death threatening Malfoy? It all seems like its trying to be obvious that he has feelings he can't hide... mixed with the common 'I'm only gay for you' plot device based on how it's being delivered...