Reviews for The Golden Snitch
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 13 . 12/26/2011
~ And Voldemort drinking mint tea.

That's what prompted me to open this story.

~ They almost seem to be like tangled together! What the devil is going on here? it's as if they were holding hands!

They hold the Snitch, the Golden Snitch.

Awful. If the game was anywhere near professional, the Snitch would be charmed to alarm everybody when and who caught it.

Harry looks for a way to speak with Malfoy, without everybody speaking about this? Send a note with a school owl. Charm it so that it could be read only by Draco. Meet him under the Invisibility Cloak. Lure him into the Room of Requirement.

~ … But why, then? Why did he feel so belligerent towards him?

True. Harry should be concerned with his homicidal attitude. Act cautiously, not hastily.

Harry is very rash and quick-tempered.

~ by Morgan Le Fay's raven hair,

Curious choice of curses. If it wasn't too huge to be left out of the summary, I would have thought Harry received memories of a Morgan Le Fay's contemporary through reincarnation.

~ He cast a spell for his eyes to see perfectly well without them, and strode off towards the Forbidden forest.

How do you know it? Why didn't you use it before?

~ And heartbeats. Loud, rumbling, body-shaking heartbeats. A feeling of being very much alive.

Vampire? How is that relevant?

~ Giant Dragon-flies!

If they are anything like common dragonflies, they are beautiful, dangerous and swift. And with addition of serpent heads... They are a treat.

I hate polishing shoes. It's demeaning. Why couldn't you just have Harry scrubbing squaldrons?

~ Why does everything have to have something to do with dragons, these days? Obviously the teachers have arranged a conspiracy against me!


~ Wonder why he doesn't dress properly?

About time. Somebody should have noticed it ages ago.

~ I have this funny feeling I should go asking Professor Snape out for a date,

Hilarious, coming from Draco.

Pomfrey is unfair. She prescribes different 'medicines' to patients who are equally harmed. And she doesn't give them privacy. And she reads Lockhart?

~ I hate myself. I hate… I want to go down with that sodding sun and never see the silvery moon again… Not the silvery moon again…


~ Sourly, he remembered the accident that had happened in the morning. He had asked Professor Snape out. Luckily it had passed as a lame joke.

That's what you get for pouring your medicine into plant's pot.

~ And my baby sister…

? I can believe that Lucius is mad at Draco for being attached to Harry James Potter. I can believe that Narcissa protects Draco at cost of her own life. But Draco's baby sister?

~ Perhaps I should disguise myself as Lord Voldemort, if that would make her silent!

Yesssss! As Lord Voldemort, or as Tom Marvolo Riddle. The latter is preferable, for the former would be too recognizable, has already been used somewhere.

~ 'Most Ensnaring Costumes' by Lockhart,

As if Lockhart would share any secrets of his trade. It's surely as unhelpful as his DADA books.

Conjuring dragonhide or transfiguring anything should be impossible. It's like difference between genuine leather and imitation leather, leprechaun gold and true gold.

Dragon Tamer? So points toward Draco...

~ Truth Potion


~ My father would kill me if he knew!

That's what you vision was about.

~ He's just too good-natured to suspect a betrayal.

And he could be deadly vicious if you betrayed him.

Absinthe... Green addictive poisonous spirit.

~ How dense can she be? Doesn't she understand anything? I am being a complete ass towards her, and she thinks that the fault is in her!


Harry and Draco aren't cautious at all.

Good luck, Draco, Harry, Severus. I'm not sure whether I will find in myself the patience for your incredibly beautiful mysterious twists of fate and love. Underneath the underneath. Poetry and love within war, and war within loving family tearing it insanely apart from inside.
Me chapter 30 . 11/15/2011
This was amazing, I'm trying to figure out the end in my head. I think you left enough clues for it to all work out. Thank you for this breath taking story. You, as an amazing author, will be forever in your readers hearts.

Much love, 3

SignatureSinful chapter 30 . 7/31/2011


So there's no point growling about wanting new updates.

This probably won't ever get read seeing as Michael is gone and Rotschopf hasn't been active in years.

In fact this will probably float around in the ether for eternity. And that makes me sad. I wish I could have read this earlier so I could have let you know personally how fantastic this story is. You were obviously overflowing with talent. And so, I am full of sorrow that this story will never be stamped as complete and reach the inevitable sky high potential it has. I will never know how this closes and that is such a sad knowledge. I had hoped that a friend would continue for you with the guidance you left behind. And it is incredibly upsetting that they haven't been touched, SIX years later. I don't believe your creations nor you yourself deserve that. An incomplete legacy.

I also feel sad because I only really got into HP fanfiction after the recent final movie and then I feel sad knowing you didn't get to see the final moments of the HP era, or at least they felt like it to me.

I am an atheist. I don't believe in the conventional after death theories. But I'd like to imagine that your spirit got this message some way:

Even 6 years later, you are a fanfiction great and will be sorely missed by any who have the pleasure of reading your creations.

It is only a shame that your friends dropped the torch and so the flames of brilliance have sadly been doused.
SetToMusic chapter 30 . 7/22/2011
I am completely obsessed with this. Honestly, one of the best, funniest, cutest and hottest fanfics I've ever read... NEVER STOP, PLEASE. Need. Update. nyeh.
mollie97 chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
hey... i looovvvveee all your fanfics please please please with cheeries on top get to finishing the golden snitch or even milkk is my sugar they are really good. and you are a amazing writer 3 3
Diab chapter 30 . 6/12/2011
This is, I think, one of the best fanfictions I've ever read! I really enjoyed reading it, because it's full of delightful touches of humor, and it also has a deep dark side.

Relationships between the characters are right, and the way you make them behave respects well the original books, even if they finally fall in love. I think the arguments Draco and Harry sometimes have, and the funny jokes they tell might help keeping the whole thing faithful to JKRowling's original work.

I don't know when you're going to continue it, or even if you consider to finish it, but be sure that if you do, I won't miss any of the future chapters!

Thank you for this great fan fiction!

(PS : I'm really sorry for my bad english, I'm french...)
sage-kkm chapter 3 . 6/1/2011
El' Caliente chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Person chapter 30 . 3/20/2011
I just started reading this story yesterday and I find it highly amusing. It's a good plot and I love how everything starts tying together. The only thing I could criticize is your grammar. You might want to revise your work when you have finished reading it. There are slight spelling problems. Other then that, I loved the story. I cannot wait until the next chapter.
Anna G chapter 30 . 2/23/2011
This story is exceedingly well-written. I just have one question?... WHERE IS THE REST OF IT? Seriously dude, yer making me antsy...
LadyGhai chapter 30 . 2/10/2011
when the hell are you planning to update? plss.. i want to know what will happen.. oh please,,
Lextacy95 chapter 30 . 1/3/2011
Please please please PLEASE! Don't abondon this story! It is absolutely amazing!
Arrow'Nash chapter 30 . 11/6/2010
This is actually the best Drarry fics i have ever read, maybe even the best fic i have ever read and I've read a lot. I've been reading this for a few days and i got to this chapter thinking it was the last, I though the story was complete. However when I saw the tbc, I said a word that you only see people say in comic books. I said Eep. quite loudly. o.o Please update this soon! Oh and just to break this formal review, I like cheese and deoderant powered limos! :D
ThunderClouds7 chapter 30 . 10/8/2010
ywusq chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
i love how Voldemort is drinking mint tea in your summary :)
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