Reviews for A Bet of a Lifetime |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Dude where is chapter 65 and I've read the entire thing again it's epic please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() When are you giving us the next chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Upon reading the summary, I just can't help but see the similarities between Naruto and Jose Rizal |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the summary. I'm exited how naruto deals with nagato and konan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This Summary Chapter would have been useful like a week ago as I have re-read the whole damn thing) but overall nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() So pleased with this chapter, love the reveal! Don't really get why he didn't know at this age in canon, he already proved he can keep a secret with the Nine Tails thing (not that it was really a secret lol). "I've never seen anyone with red hair!" Gaara: am I a joke to you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seeing Naruto progress like this is awesome. And that ending is interesting, I like that I really never have a solid concept of what to expect from this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why do you unnecessarily keep killing important figurs First Kankuro and then Shizune There was no need to do that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shikamaru is always a great character to read, and his back and forth with his dad here was good. I like the explanation for how he didn't really notice what was going on beforehe didn't try to notice. Makes perfect sense with who he is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that we're still seeing the light-hearted stuff to balance the heavy things that are happening. Also gonna be interesting to see how Naruto's clientele reacts to such a drastic difference in tone for his second novel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto's been picking up more reading than just sealing jutsu it seems. The amount of inferences he's able to make about how the polictical world works, even with his experiences, is crazy. Naruto's always been intuitive, but this is a new level. Also a new Naruto, Kurama is absolutely right |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I keep getting surprised by the directions taken in this story. That's a good thing, just crazy the things that keep happening lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not so much a prophecy as much as an observation lol. Makes sense to stagnate his progression a little bit, that same rate probably wouldn't have been viable for long, and compared to canon, he woulda been crazy ahead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Life in the Leaf is actually fun to see, the world spins without Naruto, but he still affects it. Focusing on Neji specifically is also interesting, often Neji doesn't seem to be explired in tandem with Naruto. |