|Reviews for A Wasted Wish|
| nashmeira chapter 1 . 3/30
Really cute story and very sweet. :3
| Vangran chapter 1 . 1/12
I love it! The hint of romance/incest which turned into mother-son bonding in a totally platonic way was perfect! Thanks for sharing.
| lol no chapter 1 . 8/2/2017
and they fucked .
| Archimand chapter 1 . 1/29/2017
soun married his sister ... so thats why they all mental.
| Zhor chapter 1 . 1/9/2017
| Leaprechaun1 chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
That was amazing! Thank you for writing and posting it!
| Naora91 chapter 1 . 4/19/2016
Damn it! I wasn't prepared for the feels!
| Anon chapter 1 . 1/21/2016
A wasted wish and a wasted plot. The characters are too rushed as is the story itself. Ranma seems pretty OOC and the comment about him being sexist is retarded since he is as far away from this as you can get.
Skuld is also OOC and the comments about her hammer ect seems ill placed and detracts from the story itself.
There is of course the whole typical bullying aspect to it, but since Ranma was only allowed to stay three days in the past and he is told he isn't allowed to change the past and that Skuld will just erase the timeline if he does - this kind of make the whole story feel like it's not going anywhere. No maybe Ranma can't change the past, but being told in advance by the story that he wont because of he did the story would basically not mean anything since everything would be erased - this eliminate the feeling of suspense.
And then there is the female Ranma and Nodoka.
1. The way you are telling this make it seem as if Ranma doesn't look like his father at all. His female form should resemble his mother, but not THAT much.
2. Why did you use coltish to describe Nodoka? Coltish from means you are full of energy... how does that describe her body? Later in the story we find out that she doesn't have a nice body like the female Ranma... so maybe you are confusing coltish with another word?
3. Ranma turning into a girl was pointless and wasted. His ability to change gender could have been used t his advantage allowing him to change things in the past ect... also if he resembled Nodoka that much she might have believed him a cousin or something. But non of this was used... so what was the point of having him change gender? If it was only to show us that there was a danger of him being turned into a girl - this should have happened several times and been a real problem.
4. What was up with that old lady? Did she see him change in the fountain? If not, how did she know it was him? Also, such a thing was just glossed over by her? She feels like a stupid self-insert snarker and Ranma's reaction to her figuring he was cursed was him glossing over the importance of this as well. The old lady felt out of place and pissed me off... and what was up with her offering him a job when he had tried paying her with money that was from 1995? or maybe she was URD in disguise?
Then there was Soun Tendou. Did this fanfic really hint at that he had children with his sister? That would actually be kind of funny... but most likely it was just there for that one joke - which of course made him even meeting Soun pointless.
So yeah... a plot with potential wasted on pointless drivel.
| aliesterus chapter 1 . 1/19/2016
Fun ride this one, definitely a different take on the average Ranma 1/2 fanfics.
| duskrider chapter 1 . 10/7/2015
Fantastic story I loved it.
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
| Screaming Dean chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
This was very nice.
| ryoryuran chapter 1 . 3/14/2015
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