Reviews for Without You
mounds01 chapter 16 . 8/28
I love this story and hope that you will finish it.
4Gracie04 chapter 17 . 8/22
Amazing story! I started reading and couldn't stop until the end. I am hoping you decide to add more chapters because this story is so unique. Jake should be allowed to tell Bella about the wolf. Eddie and Alice are psycho;) Loved the storyline and my most favorite part was when they got together pre-phase. The love scene here was so sweet and beautiful! Little Danny is just so darn adorable hope he gets a little sister or brother in the future. Loved, loved, loved this story!
Guest chapter 17 . 8/21
I stumbled across this out of boredom and all I can say is I devoured all seventeen chapters and hope there will be more. I love this spin while also hating it for Edwards dastardly behavior
rachel625 chapter 17 . 8/13
This has been very interesting to read! I hope Jake tells Bella that he is one of the wolves. please come back and write more!
mounds01 chapter 17 . 4/12
This is a very good story. I hope you get to finish it. Great Job!
Guest chapter 17 . 4/10
Such a shame you didn’t finish this one It is a great story so far
April-Showers82 chapter 17 . 4/7
Please write more on this story! I'm so invested in this story. I've read it straight through. I do hope that you're still interested.
Peacelovefairy chapter 17 . 12/27/2018
Oh wow
Ademide Adeyemo chapter 8 . 12/1/2018
pls pls pls pls s pls update soon
you're story really gets me
Debbie Hicks chapter 17 . 11/16/2018
18. Chapter OW! Bella burnt with a ging child was Im,mortal Volturi found her changed yiu there hetr screams was MMMURDERD With her child was a immortal child from alieven v finally her then too late We sentced you both with biten fve Felix I WANT HR I WANT HER Let me go Kill the newborn imprintgg her screams asssulted but abudsing torn then blood was freed then EXECUTED!~With a immortal child like asha ofd the Denali then with themn damages TTore a skin the Alien venom was onto as all of the heed's seer had a vision Bella then too late Bella was dead draind from the blood loss with the child looked at you guessed it 7 Or 8 CAR;LISLE Bella''s deads you die with her hyer screams with is Fire burnt her/with them ours KILLEDWith them the Venom from both alien snakes then too late with him Pierced freely good departed then too late Bella Struggled of the thirst and bloodlust with them blew away fully time pierced freely she surrenders of more immortal children guilty we sentenced her/they to death aged to be teenagers are Shiftpires Fled from bodies then bought here the head found her with torn bloodliest clothe then Pierced frely the damages was real but true with them bought here herself had a venomous burn in her frozen throat burned for now Alice she was Attacked like Rose Lillian has no kids Her daughter with siblings turned her with venom Bella oh my god help us we need Blood then blew from the traps good with theirs with others Snapped then bought here good they harbor newborns were finally killed with both with hybrids what bitten are All-Venomous are dead finally bring them here too late we sentenced them to death the venom is from alien snakes killed them sliced made them undead bring them here they are punished then took lives from here then you six were found guiloty of lies then Murdered but Execution was real but true then had as all of As all of Guaeds bitten freely then too late Carlisle heard the banging of Isabella Black dressed in her wedding dress hair was Fimer thicker sexiest Eyes were Venomous Falkor's red cold but icy skin oh my god What you Done to Me! oh god her throat Isabella you can'tmate they murdered me like Rose Hale I Need blood from Animals she was brutally assaulted her with they then too late First Hunt followed then suddenly as all of most animals Drained as all converision took place then her eyes were bitter so she like her was very sorrowful but more grieved but hurtfukl wrathful but vengeful but more scorned was frosty impassive colder and harsher icy but emotionless but expressionles blew frely Took from her good yiou are guilty as Cullens Clamped freely then took from her/they then Cursed with true but real bitter immortality from Artemis blew from here bring them brought here we sentenced them to die here then Crystalized Ashes forever bound then too late were from most last remains bitten with the others stolen more looks/traits nuked with ten good now they are mine forever then too late herself was icy stone cold never breathed at all then Glowing more You'r sushi BETAZED CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! Sparkling stars exploding then a lip rod
Reichain Blikov chapter 17 . 8/29/2018
please wright more
Spider-MansWoman chapter 1 . 3/22/2018
Plz write more. I love this, it’s amazing and I can’t wait for more.
Fandomsareawesome chapter 17 . 3/10/2018
Please say you are still writing this story and haven't given up on it. I have loved reading all of these chapters so far.

I loved the interaction with Bella and the pack when she came back and how she had to convince Jacob that she still loved him, but then when his son was mentioned he pretty much forgave her. I also love the fact that the Cullen family are split. I always knew that Rosalie would side with anything that would keep Bella human.

Cant wait for more xx
sammljp chapter 17 . 3/5/2018
Pleassseee update!
Guest chapter 17 . 2/28/2018
This was really amazing :) I could literally visualize it as a movie in my head, whenever you decide to update again, I'll definitely be here!
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