Reviews for The Union |
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![]() ![]() This story is written very well, the plot is unique, the character development is amazing. I hate it. The fact that Hamilton doesn’t hold big enough of a grudge, large enough suspicion towards the people who KIDNAPPED him, forced him to stay, really really really pulls my strings. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, please, please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok I know I already commented but I love the Adventure Time easter egg! It's Marcy's song!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Right, well, Hamilton was, of course, drugged off his ass, so he wasn't really thinking...straight...and he...yeah..." I don't know if this was supposed to be a pun/play on words but I found it really funny! Also this story is amazing! I'm very addicted to it! |
![]() ![]() Is it bad that I have a fan fiction for this fanfiction? The plot is great the way they act is great, the story is great, everything is amazing. |
![]() ![]() Of course Jefferson is a third. |
![]() ![]() PEGGY PEGGY PEGGY PEGGY PEGGY PEGGY PEGGY ahh why why why you are a good person and gorgeous girl PEGGY ahh why why why? |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg I NEED YOU TO UPDATE. LIKE. STAT. this story is so good, like...woah. the lams is amazing, the sisters are amazing, the union thingy is amazing, just all of it is amazing. and it helps that you write really well. so please update. so i don't die. my life is in your hands. think about that. lol no pressure tho xxstella |
![]() ![]() I actually cried ps pls hamliza |
![]() ![]() I am so hamliza nicely written but a was starting to think of laurance as a mentor |
![]() ![]() Amazing can you make it hamliza and Lauren's sad |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY |
![]() ![]() NOOOOOOOOOO MY BABYYYYYYY YU ARE AN EVIL PERSON! HE BETTER BE OK |
![]() ![]() ![]() EXCUSE ME DONT MEAN TO BE RUDE BUT THIS IS NOT ALLOWED IT IS CRUEL AND UNUSUAL PUNISHMENT |
![]() ![]() ![]() DEBORAH MOTHERFUCKING SAMPSON |