Reviews for A Bit of Blackened Fate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hadn't thought about this fic for a long time, but it's still a lot of fun! Nice to hear from you again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() does MC's name mean white dragon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought it was funny when Judal just gulped down the chunk of raw magic, but making out under the influence of magic doesn’t seem like the best idea to me. I mean, there’s using magic for /fun/, but i’m a bit wary when it doesn’t seem like they’re in control of their actions. At least nothing bad has happened yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn’t welcome you back last chapter; sorry about that! I am happy to see your writing again, in a fandom i’m familiar with. I’m having a thought here, after seeing the way Judal was watching Gyokuen in this chapter. I’m not sure how to put it into words, but what if … she’s somehow linked to whatever’s going on with the black-eyed children? I mean, if they’re drawn to Judal’s shop because of Hakuryuu coming into his magic… |
![]() ![]() Good to see the bois again lol. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, early December is technically still autumn! Don’t worry about it! *casually ignores the fact that i was starting to wonder* I struggle with updates and finishing stuff by the time i want to as well. Welcome back. Turns out i’d forgotten how much i love these two. I really enjoyed Judal’s “I wanna go, i love having you drive me around to stupid places.” This chapter was incredibly fun. |
![]() ![]() Welcome back! I really wanted Judal to stay over night |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m a bit late, but happy birthday! I love Judal’s policy on returns. I’d kinda like to hear him tell that to this woman, although it was fun watching her and Hakuryuu try and talk their way around each other. And Judal’s cooking disaster was so cute. I like it even better not knowing what precisely happened. And “I don’t /want/ to see your kitchen.” Knowing Judal, he made a huge mess, including getting some kind of sauce on the ceiling. But he’s so cute trying to be romantic. |
![]() ![]() Happy Birthday! This was a cute chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh and I forgot to add. I hope you soon unveil some of Judals past! How old is he really. Is he 100% human or Hakuryuu just thinks so but isn’t exactly right? How did he get the shop? So many questions! I hope you plan to answer some of them in the following chapters! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy Birthday! Boiii it was so cute! You seriously deserve so many more follows! Please, never ever leave This fic. It’s brilliant! I love it so much. It’s clever And really interesting but in like Non nonchalant kind of way. I don’t know how to explain, but I hope you understand! It’s so down to earth but not in the way that I fell kind of second hand embarrassment for the characters. Okay I should stop now because I really don’t know how to express what I’m feeling XD but to conclude, ITS GREAT! PLEASE KEEP GOING! And once again HALPY BIRTHDAY! |
![]() ![]() AHHHHHHH! Relationship progression! I love it sooo much! |
![]() ![]() i love this omg the writing is so good & funny |
![]() ![]() ![]() Atta boy, Hakuryuu. If someone lent /me/ a magic key like that, you can bet i’d be keeping it too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, helpful Judal is a cranky Judal. He’s great, as always. I love how Hakuryuu is letting more of his asshole side show around Alibaba. Either Judal’s rubbing off on him, or he’s really frustrated with how troublesome Alibaba is being. I like how you write Cassim, too. |