Reviews for Unforgiven: revised version
Nubian Queen chapter 3 . 9/15/2003
OK, you've hooked us, got us hanging on the edge of our mousepads waiting to see what will happen next, please put us out of our misery and post the next chapter...or two or three. It's been awhile since I dropped in on this one but it's still just as intriguing.

Please keep writing!

Sincerely, The Nubian Queen
LauraCeleste chapter 3 . 4/29/2003
This is a COOL story :) Please continue!
missambermariek chapter 3 . 4/29/2003
Keep going!
caryn chapter 2 . 4/29/2003
Great story, but are luke and leia BOLTH dead?
Nubian Queen chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
Well, it looks as if you are off to a great start, now how about the rest of it? Please! Pretty please with choclate covered Hans and Anakins on top! But seriously, I like your beginning, it shows promise for a very interesting story to come. And it is a unique idea to kill off (or at least seem to) Luke and Leia. I haven't seen that move before. You also show a good command of word usage and sentence structure which I find appealing in any story. Please keep up the good work and post again soon.

Sincerely, The Nubian Queen
liz chapter 1 . 3/3/2003
I am glad to see this is back. Looking forward to more!