|Reviews for Grimm Mother Snippets|
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2018
Muy bueno actualizar
| creativesm75 chapter 5 . 8/8/2018
| sonic chapter 5 . 3/17/2018
I liked the chapter!
| LordXeenTheGreat chapter 5 . 11/25/2017
| LordXeenTheGreat chapter 4 . 11/25/2017
| LordXeenTheGreat chapter 3 . 11/25/2017
| LordXeenTheGreat chapter 2 . 11/25/2017
cute little chapter
| LordXeenTheGreat chapter 1 . 11/25/2017
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/21/2017
Any chance for some Omakes with Taylors who have access to portals?
Like "Taylor Vega" by mp3.1415player, "Queen of Blood" by SirWill or even "Lady of the Flies" by InsanityIncarnate90 ?nm
Their interactions with Annette and their adopted sibling should be amusing.
Heck, even the non-portal "Queen of the Swarm" by Vherstinae could be fun. As it's a like mother, like daughter in a way.
And Omakes are just what ifs, so won't harm your actual storyline.
As for this chapter.
Adam's dead GF, wouldn't be Blake would it?
Just double checking, because it's just as possible that he was involved with someone else. (Like Siophia, Parahuman Supremacy would seem like the sort of thing she would go for. Either that or join up with Raven Branwen.)
Plus the whole clone and faking death thing, that's always a possibility.
Oh and if you want real scary. Have Adam kill off the Butcher by accident.
Those two should be a match made in hell.
| bayhon282004 chapter 5 . 9/22/2017
Great to see that Adam, Roman and Neo has made it to this story. Sad that Blake has been alluded to but is most likely dead (it doesn't get any deader than how Roman recounted it). :C
Like Emily Piggot, it looks like Cindy hasn't recovered from Ellisburg either. Bringing out these details truly fleshes out the story even more. I hope that Crystal comes out of this OK. Please keep up the good work. :)
| Greatazuredragon chapter 5 . 9/22/2017
Very good chapter. Loved how Roman basically replaced Coil there, but if Neo is one of his 'pets' then who is the other?
Very nice chapter, good work.
| John Therion chapter 5 . 9/22/2017
A cliffhanger of sorts? Damn. I want to see Cadmus wreck taurus. He was an asshat in the RWBY and if anything he's worse here. At least torchwick still has a brain in his box.
| bayhon282004 chapter 4 . 9/19/2017
Ellisburg really did a number on Emily Piggot. I mean yeah in cannon she's a bureaucratic thickhead but for her to go on as she is with the shadow of complete renal failure hanging over her suggests a whole new level of stubbornness. Still it's a relief that she's become counter intuitive to Protectorate propaganda (in a good way). Will be waiting for more Grim Mother stories from you with baited breath.
| ultima-owner chapter 4 . 9/19/2017
| Greatazuredragon chapter 4 . 9/19/2017
Nice interaction there between Annette and Pigot.
Nice chapter, good work.