|Reviews for Proximate|
| Uchiha Aimee chapter 21 . 9/20
Loved it! Great work!
| AvadaKedavraBitch chapter 21 . 9/18
The most important thing about this fic, to me, was Hermione's accomplishments as (obviously) the greatest healer of all time. Like, of course the greatest witch of her age would figure out how to reverse the sinister, mind altering effects of the cruciatus curse (with the help of theo, yes, but let's be honest. he couldn't have done it without her)! What she's done for Neville... can that be canon? Hello!
A sidenote: it was a shock, but a nice one, when Scorpius' existence was revealed and also nice that there was no animosity between any of his parents, but warmth and love all around.
(I forgot to mention in my review of Chronos Historia that I was touched that Hermione, and Draco I guess, could so significantly help the ghosts of slytherin and ravenclaw house. There seems to be a little theme of Hermione making such important history in these stories and I'm a fan.)
All in all, this was a great read and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!
| jillytucson chapter 21 . 9/10
I absolutely love this story. Just sat down and read it, then when I finished, read it again immediately. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks for sharing!
| BellaB88 chapter 21 . 9/8
I've always been a Harry/Hermione shipper, but I just recently started reading Draco/Hermione stories and this is definitely one of my favorites! Great job!
| blackdragon2882 chapter 21 . 9/4
one of my absolute favorites
well written and a extremely believable story
| MykEsprit chapter 1 . 8/28
You’re an awesome writer, and I love the premise of this fic! Looking forward to reading the rest of it!
| CourtingInsanity chapter 1 . 8/28
Love you and your amazing writing talent! Xxx
| Guest chapter 20 . 8/28
The stupid idea that a psychiatrist ever helped anyone is annoying. Other than that huge fallacy, it is not a bad fic. It kind of makes me vomit a little when they talk about getting 'help' like it is actually helpful though.
| Novel's addict chapter 21 . 8/28
Such a unique story! Loved it a lot
| Guest chapter 21 . 8/25
Thank you so much for this beautiful story, I read it in one evening and love it so much. It’s exactly the storytelling my heart yearns for since I don’t like villains and lots of drama— just normal people falling in love, growing as they struggle through the usual things. I love how you included family, friends, career concerns, health fears as well as humor in this. It was all so heartwarming! Plus the side plots were so interesting— Healer Granger’s research could easily be its own story! Thanks again for sharing your gift, you are so talented! I’m left with a feeling of happiness and smile after reading this :)
| garciamonique2011 chapter 21 . 8/22
This was so so wonderful! I loved how their relationship started out as casual sex but turned into something more. I loved how close Draco was with his son and how he kept him out of the limelight and how he was trying so hard to be better than his father. I loved how Hermione doubled her efforts at work to help find a solution for Astoria's condition even though they were not close at all and had basically no relationship. I loved how Astoria and Narcissa came to love Hermione and how her friends came around to accept Draco as well. This epilogue was super cute, showing all of the new familial and romantic relationships that exist. I loved how Scorpius has 2 little sisters on both sides of his family and that everyone's happy. Also, on a sadder note, how you described Hermione's nightmares and breakdowns and how her research affected her was so real it hurt. I really felt her pain and Draco's when all he wanted to do was help her. It was extremely well written and emotional.
| MoonyGirl828 chapter 21 . 8/20
Awe I love them so much! Beautiful story, thank you 3!
| Whit96 chapter 21 . 8/18
Oh I love this so so much!
| kkelly04 chapter 21 . 8/14
Loved the story!
| Ruselly Adita chapter 11 . 8/10
I don't understand why Hermione cares so much about what Ron thinks even after he cheated.