Reviews for Proximate |
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cnova chapter 3 . 6/12/2019 Ginnnnyyyyy!It all makes more sense now; Damn, that's cray and sad for everyone all around; Mandy gon find out! |
cnova chapter 2 . 6/12/2019 YAAAAAS I forgot this was a quidditch!draco fic!; I like Draco's approach to meeting her in the halla singular occurrencelmao; interesting, interesting... |
ElizColl chapter 18 . 5/31/2019 This is my favorite chapter so far because most fics make him so perfect and unwaveringly supportive (or vice versa). I like that they had a real life argument and had a hard time figuring out how to get past it. |
Greenti chapter 21 . 5/25/2019 What a fantastic story! Loved every bit of it! |
Lostyourmind chapter 21 . 5/7/2019 Ooh totally in love with this story! Such a feel good read! Thank you for sharing! |
Shiaira73 chapter 20 . 5/4/2019 lol... 3rd story of yours that I have read this week. I am really enjoying your stories. Thanks for the fantastic journeys. I just favorited you as an author. Keep up the great work and once again... thanks for sharing your stories. |
AnnePEI chapter 21 . 5/1/2019 I read Chronos before I read this one... I’m so glad to read another long Dramione. This is one of my favourite! It was written ages ago, so you might have fixed this, but you want to watch your pronouns when you’re talking about 2 people... if the house was Draco’s and Hermione’s, it would be his and her house, not his and she’s house, etc. I find it easiest to just imagine if I’m writing one person and the right pronoun usually comes to mind then. Thank you for this, it was sweet, interesting and uplifting. The Longbottoms, while I understand Rowling’s perspective, were one of the most tragic parts to the original, so I was thrilled to see a happy ending for them! |
Amber26262 chapter 21 . 4/21/2019 Just a quick word to say how amazing your stories are ! I’m so glad there are so many of them, I can’t stop reading them ! Dramione forever ! Don’t ever stop writing ! |
Ellae chapter 4 . 4/12/2019 I usually never review til I finish a story (I’ve been burned before... and I’m a bitch) but your writing has so rapidly grown in authenticity and appeal, it’s truly a pleasure to read. Hermione’s brokenness and confusion, along with the realistic focus on her work, plus Draco’s straightforward yet still appealing nature has been a delight. You’ve created some compelling characters in a short time which is always an impressive feat and so enjoyable. Looking forward to where this goes, e |
Takingaffbreakokbye chapter 21 . 4/5/2019 This was such a great read! I couldn’t put it down! The medical aspect was great. I have 9 years in the medical field and you did this fantastically! |
Guest chapter 21 . 4/3/2019 This was truly amazing. I loved every single moment of this and never wanted it to end. Thank you so much for something so wonderful! |
magiemae chapter 21 . 3/26/2019 Great Story. Thank you. |
BernerMom chapter 21 . 3/23/2019 Absolutely beautiful! I was terrible and binged this story on my first weekend of spring break. Now to go read more of your works. |
hermionegrangerfan2017 chapter 21 . 3/18/2019 I just want to say I absolutely love your stories. I am working on reading all of them while I wait for more of Distance to come out. |
HPforever2018-3 chapter 21 . 3/15/2019 I have really enjoyed reading this story. I am glad, you chose to add an epilogue. It sums everything up nicely, and also gives an update of how Astoria is. Very nice! Thanks for posting! |