Reviews for Proximate
MoonyGirl828 chapter 21 . 8/20/2018
Awe I love them so much! Beautiful story, thank you 3!
Whit96 chapter 21 . 8/18/2018
Oh I love this so so much!
kkelly04 chapter 21 . 8/14/2018
Loved the story!
earthyophelia chapter 11 . 8/10/2018
I don't understand why Hermione cares so much about what Ron thinks even after he cheated.
Aoi1995 chapter 21 . 8/10/2018
This is such a sweet story. I binge read it in 2 days and absolutely loved it. I loved how Draco and Hermione were mature and took time to accept their feelings. Both were hesitant to start a serious relationship but unsure of each other's feelings. But when took the chance they were so sure of their feelings. I loved how their relationship developed. It was beautiful and realistic. The chapter where they had a huge argument was really intense. It was heartbreaking to read it but I felt really relieved when they patch up quickly. At least they realized at that time they can't live without each other. Draco was so caring and sweet. He felt so helpless when he couldn't take care even of Hermione. And Hermione was so scared when thought that Draco don't feel for her the same and her breakdown after Draco left was really painful. They love each other so fiercely. Their confession of love was so sweet and heartwarming. Their chemistry was so intense and the smut was really hot. I love Hermione as a healer. The healer angle of the story was really interesting. Despite all of her personal problems she made her research successful. Draco as a quiddich player was hot. I have never read dramione stories where he is a quiddich player. The other characters that won my heart were Astoria, Theo and Scorpius. Astoria was so adorable and it's rare that I love her in a dramione story. I thought that she will create problem in dramione being a jealous ex. I am glad that I was proven wrong. She genuinely cared for Draco and was so nice to Hermione. I was so happy when Hermione and Theo was able to treat her successfully. I loved the friendship between Draco and Theo. He was an honest and great friend. His love for Astoria was beautiful. And I always love Scorpius. I loved the ending and really thankful that you decided to write the epilogue. I lovec to see living happily ever huge with their kids. The moment where Draco found that Hermione was pregnant was so beautiful. Being a huge dramione fan it was a treat to read this story. Thanks for writing it.
SPH chapter 21 . 8/3/2018
I was a little hesitant because after I read the summary, I thought this was another drunk-and-miraculously-together trope. But the characters were developed believably and the story became one in which I was emotionally invested as well. What I really like is, there are no evil characters in the story, just imperfect people trying to do the decent thing. I really enjoyed this world and its people. I hope you keep writing. :)
Frozen Darkness 88 chapter 21 . 8/2/2018
Quite lovely I must say, and congrats are in order for winning best healer Hermione! I thought you did a great job with her work and it shows you did some research into the subject. Much Love! -daMichi Goddess
Broadwayfreak5357 chapter 21 . 8/2/2018
This story was SO awesome and so well written! I really loved every minute of it, and especially the friendship between Draco and Hermione and Astoria and Theo! That was lovely :) This was so great and I can’t wait to read more of your work! xx Sage
savedprincess85 chapter 21 . 8/2/2018
This was absolutely beautiful and fun!
sootypoodle chapter 21 . 8/1/2018
This story was just lovely. Thank you
akorah chapter 21 . 7/25/2018
I wasn't prepared to cry through the entirety of chapter 20. The epilogue is beautiful-not too overdone. Wonderful story.
akorah chapter 13 . 7/24/2018
I have been telling myself for TWO HOURS that I'm going to read to the end of the chapter and then go grab a coffee, but that requires driving and I can't put this goddamn story down.
Squash chapter 21 . 7/21/2018
Love love loved Hermione and Draco in this!
ShineGZB chapter 15 . 7/20/2018
Amazing
niffizzle chapter 21 . 7/20/2018
Okay. I’m a super slow reader, but I finally finished! I LOVED this. It started off so casual and light hearted, and then as their relationship grew deeper, so did the surrounding issues, only forcing them to grow closer. All the subplots were brilliantly thought out and made it so much more enjoyable. I’m so glad they came up with the potion for Astoria and Hermione’s research worked out. I started to tear up when Neville gave Hermione the plant! And oh, the engagement! Such an enjoyable readThanks for sharing!
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