I like this one-shot and I think that this one-shot Is Interestning.

This made me cry.

Okay.

You have officially broken my heart.

And most likely convert me into a fan of Oreo-kun.

And...it's a good thing Oro also despises Duckass McEmoFace.

The way that you describe Orochimaru's feelings towards Kimimaro and Sasuke is amazing! Kimimaro is such an underappreciated character. He had the potential to become one of the most powerful ninja in the show, but (like Itachi, another super powerful ninja) he was diagnosed with some 'incurable' disease which led to his death. Kimimaro deserves to be remembered, especially by Orochimaru, since he practically lived for the man! Orochimaru too is seen badly by most. The way you wrote him in this fic is perfect! I really liked when yuou said that Orochimaru confused would be like the end of the world!

Very nice!