La historia está genial, pero viendo los comentarios pues no tengo nada que decir la historia está muy interesante para mi, pero no a otros pero por favor puedes continuar? Quiero saber que paso con ty lee.

kinda feels like the author had a political awakening few chapters back and started going that route with the story. it's still a good story though.

The communication feels very info dumpy and rushed, like he's word vomiting everything he's doing.

you lost me when tom tom started talking maaaaaan you tripping

Awesome fic!

daym double homicide

I like it.

The book is excellent. 9.0/10, no I won't elucidate sorry, too busy reading.

meh it was good till the politics. all novel ruined with the idealist view of democracy.

fuck you mongrel to let him say sorry to excuse the girl of katara. where is pride? where being right is more important than refreshing others' feelings. i curse you

Wow this is terrible.

I dont understand why people domt like this. It seems fine to me, dont listen to the other comments guys. Have a look for yourself and make your own opinion.

I hope you go more first person. I understand you wanted to just get to the good part and you wrote the background nicely but it would be nice to hear more details of his adventures with the avatar (if he even goes with ang)

terrible. the Self insert character is basically a non-entity in the story. He doesn't change anything, he is so irritatingly weak and pathetic. Don't bother to read this. you'll be disappointed too

huh really pathetic start. no training specific! no tobirama suiton style manipulation, no water construct training, not even proper water armament or water tool supplement fighting style.