huh really pathetic start. no training specific! no tobirama suiton style manipulation, no water construct training, not even proper water armament or water tool supplement fighting style.

This fanfic has no direction. The MC has no goals or desires, seemingly changes nothing and is both very strong and somehow cripplingly weak at times.

I had high hopes at the beginning, but this really did fall apart after the Northern Water Tribe Invasion. The emotional conflicts were just so contrived and frankly stupid. Thank you for the beginning but this is it for me.

IT'S A FUCKING TRASH FIC️️️️️️️️️️

Weak.

Fuck you and fuck this story. This character is a pathetic simp who states he want to change but is doing fucking nothing. What is the point of having an si if he doesn't change anything. Kills Zhao DONT MATTER, knew Yue and what should happen. Did fucking nothing. Attacked Azula just to cry and have a fucking moral dilemma and existential crisis. Why do ppl want to be isekaid and s I just to do fuck all. Oh I so sad I'm in a dangerous world woe is me, oh I am In a world where death happens so strange. Ppl can throw fire and water let me be a guard for an uppity princess. Oh Azula is weak let me help her and pull some fucking ridiculous enemy out of my ass. This was a waste of time. And I am sorry that i thought u had any skill.

I am interested with the story. But to me it's so slow and frustrating. A si who has knowledge and is not only skilled but powerful basically attempting to change canon yet I can agree with the choices. Yue's guard...why? His relationship to Hahn, basically nothing amounted of that. Protecting ty lee then to almost immediately afterward u brutally cripple her. Why the fuck does a si who knows that there is going to be a battle between a dangerous foe decide to STRAP A FUCKING BABY TO HIS NOT FOR THE FACT THAT THERE ARE SO FEW WELL WRITTEN AVATAR si fic out that I would fucking stop. But no its this or nothing.

So the main character being in the story changes nothing? Terrible decision.

When did azula get off the ship? That’s not clear at all

I do hope ya come back to this! I kinda expect him to kill or severely injure Azula in an attempt to prevent the lightning hitting Aang. Zuko may make a different choice cause of Mai.

I would love to see him go Amon style vs Hama and take her bending. He should really try pushing the limits of what he can do.

Hope to see it updated soon.

I do apreciate the POV so far, do you have an update schedule?

Inconsistent, perhaps bipolar SI. Stringing along characters that make no sense joining him. After the invasion of the northern water tribe the story kinda sucks. Another SI that's poorly reacted to. The complete ease in which " I control all liquids" water bender solves his problems is a trap he falls right into. Because now he's OP but we gotta "dumb" him down to make fights interesting. The lack of direction or purpose the fanfic has.
Avoid at all costs. It ain't worth it

OC is too stupid for my liking. You try to make him seem smart, but he is dumb as fuck

Doesn't he have a war to fight, why the fuck is he wasting time with the girls