I don't get the change of the oc, one minute he's willing to kill then next he's agonizing over the thought of killing pirates that are rapists and murders , basically scum

Down the rabbit hole we all go!

~Drunk

That last paragraph is an oof. It's been too long since I've read this, but I do enjoy a bit of politicking, especially if it turns against tyranny and promotes freedom.

Onto the next chapter!

~Drunk

Yeah this is too depressing. Doesn’t accomplish the same kind of enjoyment the original show did. This doesn’t manage to balance light-heartedness and adult themes well enough to get the right effect.

The class warfare aspect of the fic is interesting, but it's too shallowly explored to be truly engaging. You're spreading yourself thin.

The baby plot with the other SI is a stupid idea.
It's like you like Mai and Ty Lee and wanted a way to justify having them nearby.

God damn.
It's reasonably well written but there's so many spelling mistakes and plot holes.
The characterization is wildly inconsistent, too.

this was going at a decent pace but really not understanding the point of putting a 2nd reincarnated person in here

Eh.

It's a bit stale.

I love how Kaito just unknowingly adopts everyone

Please please please don't kill Jet! :
I mean there's legit no reason for him to die and I'd like to kinda see him and the Freedom Fighters perhaps joining in on Kaito's crazy quest!

Jet probably hates that he's not the one in charge lol!
But it would be amusing and cool to see the two groups trying to get along and work together! :)

I wonder if Jet, like so many others, will eventually come to see Kaito as 'cool big brother' material?

Also Kaito is all but starting his own little yakuza in Ba Sing Se - and he isn't even fully aware of it lol!
:D

i feel like i am cheated, i thought this is gone be kaito x mai

Hey, you accidentally named Haruto as Hiraku, the deceased water bender. Its at the very end of this chapter.

Ah, I see what a previous comment meant about the killer thing. It's definitely being milked too much, and it seems that it'll continue to be. Unfortunate.

You're pretty good at letting us, readers, see more deeply into a character. I admit that.