Reviews for Aprovechar el Sol |
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![]() ![]() ![]() SO WELL WRITTEN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() For some reason I’d read ‘hi penguin...I must leave and rethink my entire existence |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like I don’t get it. But I still like it : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was adorable Great job. Keep up the good work. ~Red |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE write an epilogue sometime! This was so beautiful and well written I may not be able to recover Dx |
![]() ![]() This is good, your mum sounds lovely |
![]() ![]() The ending was quite peaceful but also very beautiful thank you for making this story ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy heck you won my heart goodness gracious, excellent job |
![]() ![]() ![]() aaaaaaaAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! I'm crying now. Like, sobbing. I hate you. But I love you because this was so beautifully written and fluffy and ooooohhhhh my goooood it is amazing and you are amazing and gah! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful work! I loved your portrayal of the characters and the wonderful storyline. Two thumbs up! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The title makes me smile and the story made me super happy. I loved it so much and I'm glad I found this story when I did. |
![]() ![]() My name is Jocelyn! Tbh freaking me the heck out, I suddenly saw my name in the first paragraph and I was like WTF HOW DID THEY KNOW until I actually read it xD loooool And I can't believe Lance left Keih with his mom on purpose lmbo xD I love this so much ty |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh~! Are we finally gonna have some spicy scene after this? *wiggles eyebrows* |
![]() ![]() Awwwh this is so cute already I'm die I really love stories where Keith meets Lance's family, and this is done so well! I'm excited to read more :) Thank you for taking the time to write this! (I would favorite and follow, but for some reason my tablet isn't letting me log in atm sorry) |