Reviews for In the Forest
ph.pac chapter 2 . 7/31
This is an awesome amazing story!
Capecodcanal chapter 2 . 7/25
Aww! This is great; I think the second chapter was a great idea. Yay fo your firstvstory!
dramionefan1994 chapter 2 . 6/28
I really enjoyed this, thank you
Just a reader chapter 2 . 4/9
Short direct and uncomplicated. If you have time another longer story along these lines would be nice. Thanks
tyrannicpuppy chapter 2 . 3/8
So very much better than my first work.

Your writing was excellent, no errors and issues that I have all through my original effort. Going back over it and posting it at the moment has me utterly disgusted with myself. The tense is all over and the sheer amount of spelling errors was atrocious.

Nothing to fret about like that here. And such a great tale too. Especially when you add in this little bit to wrap it all up. Smut can be fun, but I do always enjoy a story more when it shows the depth of their feelings and not just their desires.
kimbclar chapter 2 . 1/4
VinoAmore chapter 1 . 12/1/2017
Oh my gosh! YES! This is my new canon! This is what really happened. I ADORE this so much. Absolutely an amazing piece and I'm so happy you shared it with us all. Thank you for that.
Harmione forever chapter 1 . 11/11/2017
Ahhhhhhh... sooooooooooo hoooooooot!
hunzbookwyrm chapter 2 . 11/3/2017
loved it from beginning to end, great story, hope to see more soon
SaintDionysus chapter 2 . 11/2/2017
Guest chapter 2 . 9/11/2017
smos chapter 2 . 9/3/2017
Loved it! That was hoooot and sweet! Wonderfully written!
pschlegs62 chapter 2 . 9/2/2017
LJ Summers chapter 2 . 8/26/2017
This was such a sweet fic. Nicely written - especially for a first outing! Thank you for giving us a bit of Harmony. :)
badkidoh chapter 2 . 8/22/2017
Good story.
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