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Ani-Me Fanboy 123 chapter 26 . 1/7 We learned how the Strawhats supply Luffy with all that giant meat now! Amazo use this chapter I enjoyed plus insight on how the DC characters view Strawhats after haniging out with them. Lex considering Strawhats a threat, now contemplating working with the Joker insane. Those 2 could be smart enough to figure out Luffy's seawater weakness and even capture him for grand execution Joker style. Would be a good trap to force the crew out in the open like a smaller Marineford with Luffy in Ace's place. Read up on the episode you're basing the next chapter on. The crew for sure becomes friends with Audrey. It's a One Piece thing that Luffy becomes friends with the ruler of a country and saves them. Wonder Woman and Batman are heroes who'll honor Audrey's wish because it's self-sacrifice to help her country. Luffy is going to show up saying bullshit and ask her what she really wants to help her. That wedding is going to be more chaotic, especially since Strawhats have experience messing up weddings to save a friend. Wonder Woman and Batman are going to be conflicted about what's the right thing again. The Savage dude with bushy eyebrows is not that deadly, but the laser will be a problem. I bet someway Batman's plan to deal with the laser gets messed up by Luffy, but still somehow saves everyone and even the castle! |
OceanLord2017 chapter 26 . 1/4 Oh Good Lord...why is Amazo becoming my favorite 'Ally'?! Maybe it's the sheer novelty of someone constantly getting existential with the SHP! Amazo: "Tell me the meaning of life." SHP: "..." Amazo: "Your logic is fascinating, and I must learn more." Deckhands: "Wait, WHAT?!" And HOLY MOLY, Amazo takes no prisoners when psycho-analyzing people! Too bad he won't be around to repeat his insight when the inevitable JL vs SHP happens! You know...I was genuinely floored that promise to Tama coming back in a BIG way in this story...even if I REALLY shouldn't have been shocked. But I gotta love it! Kudos to you for bringing in characters that faded from my childhood memory! Will admit that I totally understand Sanji's simping in this case! Although...Now I find myself wondering if Amazo ever gave Jinbe his kimono back...eh, he's learning life lessons from Pirates, the answer is NO! Lord...I could go on and on about all the great stuff with Amazo...but unfortunately, it wasn't just him and SHP this chapter. Also gotta appreciate showing WHY Superman/Batman is a friendship that has ENDURED 80 YEARS of comic book time! Even if it took a little help from Lois...and advice from 'Clark'...HA! On one hand...love Mercy becoming her own gal...on the other, that just makes Lex even more desperate...and THAT'S a scary thought. Also...Big Barda is here...if you need me, I'll be over there singing her praises, along with She-Hulk and Mirko. But seriously...loving the new dynamic she's bringing! And Diana just...rolling with it! Oh Lord...even people outside the JL are getting onto John about Hawkgirl...the true sign of 'It's THAT Obvious'. Eager for more! Til Next Time...Have Fun! |
LMB1804 chapter 26 . 12/31/2023 J'ai trop aimé le dernier chapitre ! Sa fait plaisir de voir Zoro combattre ! Hâte de lire la suite ! |
MimicKing800 chapter 26 . 12/29/2023 Great Chapter! I wonder if you have plans for 'Only a Dream' involving the Straw Hats but I am also excited about 'Maid of Honor' and if Luffy wants to meet another Princess like Vivi |
AnAddictedReader chapter 7 . 12/29/2023 Goth Nico Robin... *stare off dreamily* This is probably the best thing about your fic, up to now or probably even in your latter chapters. |
Caspian123 chapter 23 . 12/21/2023 Aww man, gor a hot minute there, I thought the Justice League would get filled with Joy while feeling and hearingThe Drums of Liberation after Savage downed Luffy |
Caspian123 chapter 15 . 12/19/2023 You know, of all the Leaguers, I believe Batman is the one that most deserve the power up that would be Haki. Even better, he would not see it as a cheap way to get better, because it IS Will made Manifest, and he has that in spades... Ohhh, the things Batman would be able to do with Conqueror's Haki! The man already has a fearsome aura, with Haki, he would be even more domineering that a yellow lantern! I hope that at the end, at least Maureen, Volcana, Grundy and Harley get to go with the Strawhats. Out of all of the supervillains, those four I believe have nothing going for them in Earth anymore, and their lives, although in more jeopardy in the One Piece world, would ve a lot more free and happy. |
Caspian123 chapter 10 . 12/19/2023 And the plot thickens... Interesting development, Marshall D Teach probably being from Earth, and that would explain why he is so different from the rest of the D clan (that we know), being a full stop villain, instead of a freedom loving rogue. If he is from the DC Earth, and took the names of Edward "Blackbeard" Teach, then, possibly, he also came into the knowledge of the importance of the D, and took it for himself. |
Caspian123 chapter 9 . 12/19/2023 Batman is taking this so hard because Baby Doll going to the Straw Hats for not only protection but a new begining is like saying that they are right and he is wrong (at least in his mind, because he didn't think about giving some of the villains a fair chance at a new begining). And if the Mugiwara are right about this, what else are they right about that ye and the others got wrong? Suddenly, the accusations of them becoming villains themselves become so much real. |
erica.phoenix16 chapter 26 . 12/19/2023 Thanks for updating. :) |
Hoplit chapter 26 . 12/18/2023 A really good chapter. I especialy Like the motherly relationship between Robin and Ace. But Robin never came of as suicidal to me. She never outright wanted to die (except the brief bit in the Alabasta katakombs). She didn't really care if she lived or died. Even then its not like she tried to die, but because the effort to keep living would be to much. But she is undiniebly in a much better place emotionaly. Its still really cute how Ace reacts once she hears her damit to a dark part of her past. And I am sure that she didn't fool Robin for a second. Maybe have her go to Volcana and ask her what she should do. Maybe Cheetah would also bei a good Person to speak for her. I also Like how Maureen and Ace have a rather sisterly relationship. I also like the way you you handled Amazo. Afteral he is never portrait as evil. Hes just naiv/unaware. Him analyzing the strawhats and trying to come up with what he should be was quite interesting. I was a Bit suprised that observationhaki was useless against him, afteral its not Just thougs and intentions, its also the awarenes of things arround you "soul of Steel"and all that. Its going to be interesting to see what Vandal Savage thinks of the Strawhats. Does he know they where the once who almoast singelhandidly distroyed his empire? Maybe have the princess give her opionion on the strawhats. Its going to bee interesting to see how the new members of the Justice League are going to react to our pirate Crew. Maybe have some of the deckhands interact with Heros they know (I Thought about Ivy and Claiface meeting some members of the Batfamily). Also you could have one of the Heros meet one of the royal flush Gang and askes them why they are staying with the Strawhats. Only to get "they saved us from beeing goverment weapons. what did you do to Help us?" Also the whole Hero debatte is always funny to come back to. I would also Like to see an Interaction between Robin and WW it would be nice to see how that would Go this time. Especialy after theire Meeting in an alternative earth. It would also bei cool If the Justice League would learn a bit more about the world gouvernement. There is a sentence about not all pirates beeing bad in One Piece. In some cases people are Just forced to become criminals without ever doing anything actually evil. The sentence goes "The Kings Rules are absolute, and some don't have other ways at a livibel future. One last thing, maybe drop some hints to the Heros about the world the Strawhats try to get Back to. Afteral it is a world where they, while still a group of considerable power, are sefinitly not the top dogs arround. And they are considered the pinicals of morality in those seas, make the Heros realise that they where extreamly lucky that IT where the Strawhats and not Big Mom or Kaido or Blackbeard those three would have Just conquer earth or at least tried it. Is Amanda Waller considering herself lucky that the Strawhats ar rather peacefull compated to her counterparts of the other futur? |
Caspian123 chapter 8 . 12/18/2023 I feel like you can make the difference in morality by te way both worlds operate. JLA heroes operate under the morals that because you are strong you must protect. Strength is a means to an end. You dont see Superman trying to be stronger, or Batman trying to be better than Superman. But in the One Piece universe, being strong is an end in itself, much moreso for people like Zoro, which dream is to be the strongest swordsman. |
Caspian123 chapter 7 . 12/18/2023 "where are you going?" "To talk with the only people besides Batman that can keep you safe from The Joker." Damn, that's a very high praise coming from one of Batman's rogues. |
King of Fans chapter 26 . 12/16/2023 Good chapter I wasn’t expecting them to take Amazo, but it was a nice change. I am surprised Amazo was able to copy haki, and not devil fruits. You would think it would be the other way around. Although I suppose Amazo’s father or Vegapunk could come up with the answer, but since they are not here it’ll likely take the robot a while to come up with the answer. Although, I definitely understand why Amazo wasn’t able to copy Zeus. A sentient cloud with a soul fragment is probably beyond his current abilities to copy. My personal theory is that it normally requires a special process for an inanimate objects or robots to get devil fruit powers that Amazo isn’t performing first. Alternatively, Amazo can copy devil fruits but there are safeguards in place that prevent him from utilizing abilities that could damage himself or obtaining powers that are fundamentally incompatible with other abilities when copied. Exploding after copying two devil fruits should definitely qualify. I really like the sparring match with Zoro, using it as an opportunity for the deckhand to get a good idea of what the swordsman is capable of was a nice touch. I really like the Hercules and the live action one piece references. Good idea with the farm and having Amazo stay their. The farm provides an alternate location for Amazo to stay until he’s needed, and having the farm present makes sense as they need a way to feed Luffy now and feed all of Wano later. The cherry on top was this entire chain of events leading up to this was set off by Lex's former assistant calling the police! Who would have thought that Harley's makeshift therapy session would be so helpful? I really like the discussion on justice this chapter. Justice no matter how you slice it is determined by those in power, and just because someone is taking the path of justice, doesn’t mean they are taking the morally correct route. Meanwhile, just because Luffy and the others are pirates doesn’t automatically mean they don’t admire and respect heroes. Interesting idea with the sun radiation device. If Bruce can replicate the technology he could build a training room for Superman, or a yellow sun generator to allow Superman to become stronger or fight in locations with a red star. I love the fact the deckhands are making theories about the straw hats origins, and previous adventures. They are pretty spot on that every member of the crew has had a tragic past, and that their life became much better after meeting Luffy. However, they are way off the mark when it comes to others like Vivi. Lastly i’m going to guess the next chapter is going to be JL focused. Unless Savage decides to target the straw hats in some way, or Luffy and the crew decide to crash another royal wedding, the crew will mostly be talking about the royal wedding when watching TV. although this will be a good opportunity for the straw hats to talk about Vivi and Sanji’s wedding. Someone might even slip by mentioning the cook is technically a prince. |
Anon chapter 18 . 12/9/2023 I feel like this chapter jumped the shark. The names from other properties was just really jarring. |