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![]() ![]() ![]() The Joker is crazy, but he deserved his face rearranged do that he could never smile again. I'm also glad Luffy didn't fold on the Harley issue, I never felt sorry for her either. |
![]() ![]() Got inspired by another review. With Joker in his new state the Royal Flush gang could now be possible recruits for the Strawhats. They could hear about them from their informants and rescue them. The Pirates and other villains can train them and maybe help ace with her problem. |
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![]() ![]() OMG I love this so much! The whole premise of the difference in justice between the worlds is amazing! The Straw Hats in that universe is amazing in general- they come from a world where you have to get strong, lest it chew you up and spit you out. The JL world is in many ways a world of glass to them. I'm looking forward to so much: Zoro wowing someone with swordplay or just being an intimidating SOB (his attack on Monet is one of my favorite Zoro moments), Luffy cutting loose, ANY concrete mention of Ace's death (though he has that one ref last chapter), the Straw Hats wrecking the Thanagarian Invasion, how episodes like Wild Cards and Injustice For All will go given Joker's condition. And is it weird that when I imagine the Straw Hats heisting and going around in their van, I imagine them wearing those leather outfits they wore at the end of Film Gold? I know you can't answer (except maybe next chapter), but are there any plans for A Knight of Shadows? I'm just saying the Philosopher's Stone is a very tempting prospect, as J'onn proved. And not just going home... not that I think Luffy would go for it given that one mini-comic where he dreamed Sabo arrived at Marineford. Also, something to consider- passage of time between dimensions. What if time in the One Piece dimension moves a lot more slowly? Like a year in the JL world could be a matter of days in the OP world? It would be a cool meta nod to the manga, given that's pretty much how times passes in-universe when we readers read it. At any rate, keep up the awesome work! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m ready for Boss Jinbei to kick some ass |
![]() ![]() Love your story so far. I like the interaction between charater and how the crew affect the world around them. Can't wait when the time travel episode. The Strawhats pirates would be the same people with no memory of the League or there criminal organisation but fighting Savege with the freedom fighters with there friend altBatman and be more successful then canon. The League will be very confused and suspicious because they seam that they didn't change at all and the Strawhats still say they are pirates not 'hero'. Possible recruit Ally Langford from that episode of Static Sock were Static and batman team up against Ivy and Harly. The result will be very different because they are now working with the Strawhats and they have to keep there word this time. Another reason is she live in Decota like Maureen and there power origine are from the same place so they can have a connection with each other and some one of similar age. Another recruit would be Terra from Teen Titans. She only wants to control her power so she can have true home. The crew (preferably Zoro) could show her how. Slade did it and he don't have power like Terra. So it make sense the she need is disabling for her emotion and confidence in her self. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Something I wondered- when did the League learn they were called the Straw Hats, and what did Usopp do to get Green Lantern and Wonder Woman’s attention? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know I’m not one to talk, but I’ll hope you update this soon. Straw Hats aside, this has really gotten me invested in their villain friends. If the cure doesn’t pan out, the crew could bring Cheetah to Zo. She might like it there. And I’m curious how the episode where Grundy dies will go. If Grundy does die, Luffy will be PISSED. I’m also hoping you get to the Justice Lords. Not only would it give the Straw Hats a chance to fight a version of the League, but they would get a lead on returning home! I’ve re-read this many times, and love it more each time! Good luck and happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was rereading your story and just wanted to say that it's amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
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![]() ![]() Hi back with a new recruitment idea. This one is Mr. Freeze. He would join with the Pirates because of the desire to save a love one which the Strawhats would like. You could alter the timeline a little so Nora is still frozen and Mr Freeze is not just a head. His role would be as an extra doctor because of how the gang is growing and be of use in lab robberies. |
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![]() ![]() Hi me again. I got new ideas for Gillian’s the Strawhats could recruit. First is Gigantia after she and Grodd have their falling out she could join the strawhats. She might remind Luffy of Hajruden and could be a big help in a full on fight against the justice league or the thanagarians (Hawkgirl’s people) when they invade. Another idea is killer Croc as he is like volcana, treated different and feared since they were young. He could help Jimbe in fighting Aquaman underwater if you do a fight like that. Or he could pull of heist that require a diver. If you already thought of these characters or any of the ones I mentioned in previous reviews then I hope to see them soon. Ps please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is like THE ONE crossover that I never thought would exist. Crossing One Piece with Justice League, adding actual real substantial plot AND keeping the characters in character? You deserve a medal! I never even imagined that someone would do something like this without butchering it with too many (unreasonable, illogical) pow scenes. Oh, this fic is wonderful. It goes straight to my favorites. I love how you're taking a slow approach to this. How you take time to introduce the characters and the situation, how you give the story background and how you put both groups onto their respective sides of the law and don't shove the Straw Hats into a same-line-of-thought-as-Justice-League sort of box just because they're both protagonists. That's my favorite. My second favorite point is how the making-friends-with-outcasts thing that is so very typical of Luffy. :D I'm looking forward to more and hope you update soon. Have fun writing! |
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