Reviews for Justice |
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![]() ![]() Soo justic league can invade any corporation? They should leak photos of batman and superman destroying building |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome fic you write here author. Update please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this story very much. It’s unique and original. I can totally imagine the SH pirates doing something like this in the DCAU. |
![]() ![]() Hey me again. I thought of how the toyman and atomic skull would want to join the straw hats. Atomic skull would want to join because of how nicely luffy and the others treat those like atomic skull and clayface who are not really human anymore. The straw hats might realize they need more technical support, so cheetah or volcanna could recommend toyman for recruitment. |
![]() ![]() Hey just of a new way for toyman to join and get along with the straw hats. Both he and Chopper both lost their fathers to bad men and both their fathers just wanted to do good things for people. The toyman in future episodes could help the crew with getaways, distractions, and vehicles with his tech skills. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehe. A Halloween chapter updated on Christmas Eve. It's like Jack Skelingto stealing Christmas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the read, very good story :D. Happy new year |
![]() ![]() ![]() Truly a great fic. I like it how you the JL is already assembled and that you didn’t start it at the begininng to try and introduce eveyone. The Straw Hats interaction in this universe is pretty funny and I love the characywrs that you have joining up with them. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a great story, and I really hope you write a continuation On the Grand Line... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dead 100 times over, and then some Interesting villain, i can see why the straw hats chose her, on top of accidentally changing herself into a cheetah, it would certainly be an incentive to become human again. Do not get between Nami and her treasure! Yes Luffy, that's all you need to think about Oh no, will they ever work their debt off? Ah there they go, all that money would go straight to the navigator God everyone does think she is the leader of the Straw Hats, how wrong they are Aww, that was sweet with Permafrost, she'd have a fun time with people unfazed by her powers, i doubt even Usopp would be. Oh that's even cuter, they definitely would be a power couple with the opposites on their side Oh dear, that is a concerning thought. But good to see Robin still being a shady badass pretending to be a heavyset woman is even more badass They do kind of have a weird quirk for when it's acceptable to kill. but it's also kind of awesome Yeah, iwould be surprised if Robin hadn't killed a few people before Luffy was like nah fam we don't do killing most of the time. I loved this chapter the most because of the introduction of the villains and how they'll all be mutually benefiting from the relationship. I also loved the bit at the end where they were all like, nah, wouldn't want to run from our friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() alrighty, i forgot to review your other works so ill get onto that in a moment. Mm, i love the extended explanantion of the effects of an allergen as such, we're hardly as lucky to receive that kind of a picture painted for us so i thank you. Ahahah, now all i can think of is how little world leaders would remain after the epidemic spreads. I mean, i'm pretty sure that they figured out how to reproduce using only females which is kind of one of males main purposes, to reproduce, i understand why Diana doesn't think they're important. in the cartoon, did Diana fall in love with anyone? Go Chopper! he'd probably be happy to have somebody to talk to freely and have them understand technical medical terms. Dayum! well, it's certainly lucky that Sapphire is a sheep rather than a conqueror. At the same time, i'm kind of saddened that she isn't, because she would be quite the opponent. Ahah, i love how nobody ever suspects Luffy despite the fact that he is the one wearing said 'Straw Hat'. Oh definitely, it certainly is a suprise that they had forgotten so soon about Pudding's deception. The Straw Hats cannot go anywhere without getting into a fight let's be real. Welp, she isn't on their side, what a surprise... Ah yes, i too am surprised that Robin so easily told her story, but, it is educational and it might help sway the Justice League. I think that the Navy/Marines here are a hell of a lot different than in One Piece, maybe that's just something they need to understand. I don't fault them for fogetting about Brook, Robin's story is captivating enough Being heroes and following Justice... certainly correct. I mean, we've seen how many brands of Justice now? Absolute, Dark, Lazy, Uncertain, it just keeps on going Out of all the Justice League i think the most likely to walk that fine line would be Batman, but i'm not completely sure as i havent watched the cartoon. Ah, so, a new brand of completely different Justice Lmao go Robin, that is the only way how to learn how to fly. Awww, that's both sweet and depressing that she has a mental folder like that. I'm certainly glad that's it's thick. Robin deserves it. I believe they all would, i read a future AU where Luffy was executed and Zoro he just went for it, killed half of the marines before he too was killed. I suppose he was similar to Carrot with her power-up, unable to last long. Certainly a way to lighten up the mood after all that moody angst Well, it kills the element of surprise but it looks cooler |
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![]() ![]() This story is AWESOME, but I have some ideas for villains who could be recruited into the gang in the future. The first is Toyman, the Straw Hats would accept him because of what happened to his dad and he could help Franky and Ussop with the vehicles, projects, and cures for the villains. My next sugestion is the Atomic Skull, he was loyal to Luthor in the cartoon so he could be loyal to the Straw Hats in this AU. His appearence could also be a factor because of how strange he looks with Luffy likes. Another villian could be Talon from the Static Shocked TV series, she would give areial support to the gang and she could relate to Cheetah and Permafrost. My final suggestions would be Lobo and Amazo. Lobo because his interactions with the Straw Hats would be hilarious and given his powers he could be very useful to them. The reason for Amazo is because he was a super nice character before he was tricked by Luthor, so if the Straw Hats found him first they could be better role models for him, because even if he gains Martian Manhunters ability to read minds he would see their past and simpathize with them because of his loss of Doctor Ivo. |
![]() ![]() This story is AWESOME and I have a few ideas for villains the strawhat a could recruit. The first could be the Toyman because he would add some technology and the strawhats would accept him because of what happened to his father. The next could be the Atomic skull, his powers could be useful and he seemed loyal to luthor in the cartoon so maybe he would be loyal to the strawhats in this AU. Also his appearance might help him be recruited as how diverse the group is at this point. Another that could work is TAlon for the Static Shock TV show. She could sympathiese with cheeta and Permafrost and bond with them. My final ideas are Lobo and Amazo. Lobo because his character would interact with the strawhats would be funny and he could be useful. Amazo because the Strawhats would be a much better influence on him than Luthor. The strawhats could find him after they get a tip about technology created by Amazo's creator. |