Reviews for Justice |
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PutAsideDevil chapter 5 . 10/23/2017 I could see The Riddler, Mr Freeze, Poison Ivy, Harley Quinn, Clayface, Captain Cold, Heatwave, The Trickster, Ultra Humanite, Jinx, or Tala joining the Straw Hats |
catzrool chapter 5 . 10/23/2017 so much philosophy ! really makes you think... |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/22/2017 I am sorry but it apears my review was not posted probably my fault but anyway good chapter it was entertaining and the zoro part was hilarius. :) Sorry for my english. |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/22/2017 Nice chapter, the action scene was fine. i was thinking What effects would Luffy and brook suffer and it was answered well, i think. The part oficina zoro taking it as his first hangover was extremly funny. :) Sorry for my english. |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/22/2017 The only villains I could think they would join the Straw Hats are: Solomon Grundy, Bizarro, Ultra-Humanite, Harley Quinn, Catwoman, any of the Rogues (probably Captain Cold, Heat Wave, Captain Boomerang or Trickster), Mr. Freeze and Lobo. |
Guy chapter 5 . 10/22/2017 Loving this! Best Justice League crossover! |
InfiniteUniverses chapter 5 . 10/22/2017 Hey i love this, and i love all of the character interactions and im really looking forward to seeing more interaction between the league and the straw hats, and how you incorporate future episodes or new stoylines! whatever u do, its gonna be epic! im especially lookin forward to a better world, since its basically the realizations of the straw hat's current fears. and im liking the idea of the straw hats recruiting villain, ive had some ideas (like maybe cheetah, shade and the ultra humanite) but i havent had a good sit down and watch of the series lately so my dcau knowledge is not full. anyway, i cant wait to see your ideas for who will join. finally, i hope u enjoy writing the this story and i appreciate the hard work u put into it because i have love reading it. good luck and thank u for sharing your amazing writing! |
gregorian12 chapter 5 . 10/22/2017 Good stuff! btw I read some of the reviews first of all... come on guy static not even a villain and two I doubt the others won't tell any of there associate about the portal or there way back (especially since that will only cause more trouble if the heroes find out about it). now as for villain, I don't see them recruiting Catwoman (Though I do see her and Nami having a friendly rivalry of sorts when it comes to stealing stuff). Perhaps the rogues but only to help in distraction. Btw any plans for Tabula Rosa (Cause I can see Amazo, for the most part, being a trouble for most of the straw hats except for Luffy who already dealt with someone of similar power AKA Katakuri and either Jinbe or Usopp who probably realize the Amazo gain there abilities after seeing how they work and tell the others not to fight Amazo as it will only make him stronger.) or a better world (With Luffy being the one who realizes something very important 'Where's Flash?' |
sharingankakashi007 chapter 5 . 10/22/2017 With Luffy here and his op charisma stat, was wondering when this would happen With recruiting(never have i heard a word more sweet dattebayo) going on Now they have a method to even up the numbers But a question arises If someone from earth actually go with them back to their world? And when they go back, wonder how much time would have passed?! Blackbeard won't have stayed quiet... (Just a thought) Now in this chapter the female strawhats were awesome Loved the ideological discussion between them And the fact that they actually are starting to communicate with words rather than fists The league seems to be getting more info about them It seems ominous The league may end up doing something that actually forces a genuine response from strawhats. Lastly more Zoro plz Maybe him scaring the soul out of any villains who get uppity And wonder who's dealing with the people they recruit Franky? (With his history in the dumbass mafia) Or Zoro? (who's freaking scary) Or someone else!? Dying to read more So next chapter.. plz |
snake screamer chapter 5 . 10/21/2017 Okay real reason I suggest having the straw hat discuss Injustice for all. Too easy (Though have Luffy consider both Ultra-humanite and Grundy. but not cheetah, shade, or Copperhead) "Huh, why those two?" Carrot asked. It was rare since both she ad Jinbe were working secretly to gather some of the more dangerous objects "U.H. cause he smart, like crazy smart, he could help around the lab" Luffy said Robin chuckle, she imagines the ultra-humanite to literally try to punch most of the childish member of the crew and yet asking for brook autograph all the while. "Yeah, but he did betray lex. Can we trust him not to do the same for us" Usopp pointed out "Yeah, but that Luthor guy not what you call trustworthy, All U.H did was to take him down first, Like Law would have done" Franky stated "True... but why Grundy. Isn't he more or less a zombie." Usopp said he wasn't a big fan of zombies after Thriller Bark 'Hmm, hard to say but I feel he not really a bad guy, just someone dealt a bad hand, I think if he was Nakama with us, he is a much nicer guy, he could serve as Nami bodyguard" "Hmm... it would be nice not to have to knock some sense from people who are stuck in a perverted fantasy or sleep half the time." Nami muttered eying Sanji, Zoro and Brook another villain would be either Freeze (From the original batman cartoon) or Catwoman, Freeze cause i imagine the more sympathetic Straw hats to understand why he did those crimes though tell he can use his weaponry on humans no more (With Freeze relenting since Chopper in a weird way reminds him of himself before his tragic accident) serving as either cannoneer or getaway driver Creating roadblock to prevent people from following. |
iron maker2 chapter 5 . 10/21/2017 I imagine this to happen after injustice for all with Joker to tell batsy they wouldn't offer it to him if he paid them "Simple... they have a strange moral code, if I ever cross path with them I doubt i can escape with anything less than a body cast and a very nasty coffin. I'm crazy batsy not stupid." "You join Lex Luthor group." "That cause Lexsy doesn't care enough and my other teamies... well let's be honest they know when not to mess with a pennywise. the straw hats are a different beast though. There a group i actually purposely avoid touching. (Btw if Carrot with them, cause i totally see her taking care of the other. Afterall Jinbe with them. and i imagine Sanji that he can't be part of the process) "Why not!" Sanji snapped "Cause you would whine whenever we say a female villain can't join!" Franky snapped with everyone nodding |
Another Guest chapter 5 . 10/21/2017 I noticed Carrot doesn't seem to be part of the crew here. Does that mean you're not part of the camp that thinks she'll join the crew with Jinbe (I got the idea from Tekking101)? I just kind of want to know for sure so that I'll at least stop waiting for her to just pop up somewhere. Also, I get the sense that this universe's version of Cheetah will join the crew, love to see how she'd interact with Chopper. And just to be clear, Luffy's going to want them to come back to his world with the Strawhats, right? I can imagine the new recruits may not want to, but how long is the crew going to keep them? |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2017 You'rer doing extremely well with this story. First, its a very interesting concept that is well written. Second, you're really thinking through each path you could take with your story. Finally, the pacing so far has been outstanding. It seems you're releasing a chapter every 20 or so days and the chapters are long with a lot of plot development and action in each of them. I applaud you for your hard work. |
FinalBossValvoga chapter 5 . 10/21/2017 Hi, I'm really enjoying the story so far . I'd say this is one of the better one piece crossovers! Cheers |
Firefly9715 chapter 5 . 10/21/2017 As always this is an amazing chapter and I can't wait for the next chapter. |