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Guest chapter 29 . 10/7 I have come to dislike a lot how biased in favor of the Straw Hats this story has been. The truth is that in most arguments won by the Straw Hats the League should be the winners. Even in this chapter the League was right 80% of the time but the narrative implied the opposite. I feel like you have taken the Straw Hats to an extreme that makes them way too different from their canon selves. Even their dislike of "Justice" is way too exaggerated. It has started to feel like Justice League bashing. |
Emperador Storious chapter 29 . 10/7 When are you going to upload a new chapter of Sea of Souls |
hdzalex084 chapter 29 . 10/7 Very inspirational writing I liked that Audrey could get past her insecurities with friends her age, more or less. |
samuraix04.xz chapter 29 . 10/7 Good chapter, can’t wait for Paradise Lost. We’re wonder woman will face her father Hades. |
CRUDEN chapter 29 . 10/7 Luffy calling supervillains idiots will never get old |
TheWhiteTitan chapter 29 . 10/7 Wow, gotta admit, I was surprised when I saw an update so quickly. Still, an awesome chapter that really tied up the story line for this arc. I'm guessing we finally get to see one of Batman's biggest baddies next time. Can't wait to see how the League of Shadows handle the Straw Hats. |
Blindluck92 chapter 29 . 10/7 All I could imagine while reading this was the collective reaction of the Straw Hats after Egghead Island. They take one look at the Seraphim and just decide, "The World Government must never, ever, EVER have access to that other world." Lunarian invincibility and Vandal Savage immortality is not a mix that's allowed. Or worse, the WG would make an Amazo Seraphim with those traits as a new baseline. *shudder* |
mellra chapter 29 . 10/7 Wonderful surprise getting an update this early! And while the SH and JL seem to have an uneasy truce right now, it looks like canon has taken a vacation and now we're getting into some original content. Can't wait to see what you come up with! |
SilverXSilver chapter 29 . 10/7 Aaaand there's the cherry. It was everything I could've hoped for and more. Audrey's gonna have a lot of work to do if she wants to prove herself as a proper queen. Hopefully we'll get to follow along with that from time to time going forward. Aside from that, it's always nice to see Diana and Bruce together like this. They really do make for a nice pair. Getting these two chapters back-to-back like this was the best treat I could've gotten this week. Keep up the great work! |
TaitanoRules555 chapter 29 . 10/7 Is it hard writing this fic on the one piece side since it’s still ongoing? |
buterflypuss chapter 29 . 10/7 good chap |
scl04 chapter 29 . 10/7 Fantastic chapter which was posted so soon after the previous one, the aftermath of this conflict is certainly entertaining and a lot more to come from it I bet! It starts with Zoro and Sanji still having some “fun” with Vandal Savage yet starting to find it boring as the tyrant regenerates from their attack and continues spouting nonsense of his superiority due to being immortal and trying to fight back…and of course it doesn't end up well for him to say the least. Meanwhile Superman and Shining Knight are finally done with their mission in space and wonder what has been happening on Earth, boy they’re in for a shock in more ways than one LOL, and the members of the Justice League that were stopping the space station finally did while wondering what to do now with the “situation” in Kaznia as well as how complicated it is for them to intervene given the gray in all of it, Batman however tells them to stay put and so they do. Back with the Straw Hats Nami and Usopp are quite grossed out about the gore presented as Vandal Savage continues to be given a beating and worse constantly and after seeing Luffy approaching with the heroes the navigator decides to end the battle and tells the Deckhands to stop and retreat already which they do, Audrey who had been begging for this to end is at first angry but when pointed out by Brook that the battle wouldn’t have stopped regardless and in fact things would’ve turned out for the worst. Anyway Luffy, Wonder Woman and Batman finally arrive and they find the place that looks like a butcher’s shop (Luffy grabbing a rolling head of Savage is well…savage ;P) and meanwhile Chopper is having a field day as he takes samples of the immortal man and gushes of how it could be the key to finding a cure for all illnesses as he dreams of finding one day, well for starters I’m sure it would be a great help to find the cure for cancer that the reindeer and Cheetah were working for :3, but he’s stopped from going further to this line of thinking in experimenting with the wannabe tyrant’s body to be careful of not ending up in a similar place like Hogback, Caesar, Judge and those other assholes. All while Diana and Bruce apologize to Chopper about the closing of his company and Nami uses to opportunity to berate them for it and wanting “compensation” as her greediness takes over as expected which Diana is irked by but lets it go and feels embarrassed when Nami notes her change in attitude from how they met at Paris with afterwards Robin arriving promising the heroes pain if they mess with Chopper’s company again as well as Maureen being questioned about her allegiance to the pirates while not going for a normal life and seeing the closeness and loyalty to Luffy as people are offended that they think that their captain isn’t actually “in charge” (nice callback with Nami being prepared with her cage for Luffy is he gets too reckless for all of them however ;P) just for the captain to refute the Amazon’s logic on the matter as Maureen was neither safe or in peace before nor there is a guarantee that she would be otherwise..so yeah lots of discussion but the brief tension is broken in favor of peace and deciding what to do with Savage. Speaking of which they go to see him next with Sanji going to accompany Maureen to Volcana and for her to not see much of the carnage with Zoro deciding to stop after being confirmed that Vandal Savage does feel pain which makes Batman glad if still not thinking it’s the best influence for kids to be around with the violence and all…he REALLy is the last person who should say that but I guess the irony escapes him at that moment XD, and reflects in the ages of the Straw Hats in hindsight and how that likely is a factor in the sense of freedom of the group as the adult members just let the captain who is barely out of his teens do his stuff. Anyway Vandal Savage starts speaking his trash towards Audrey of how she just changed from being controlled by him to the Straw Hats and especially the mastermind that is Luffy who he is introduced here…just to immediately find out about how he got it all wrong all along and Luffy is an idiot really, said idiot however is perfectly capable of telling the evil genius how his plan was stupid from the start while giving good reasons as to why which hurts Savage’s soul deeply much to the pleasure of the heroes (the bit of Batman thinking to himself what made the pirates “cynical” towards justice and wanting to punch whoever is responsible of that was nice…if a bit more complicated than he thinks nor they’re really focused much in that to begin with) as well as calling Nami and Robin sluts out of pettiness which he ends up badly for him as expected (Diana and Bruce meet Zeus by the way as well with the expected reactions to the sentient cloud’s name and…well everything in general LOL) and then the bit with Robin’s “suggestion” cracked me up with Wonder Woman finding it amusing too and thinking of doing the same if she’s disrespected like that in the future much to Batman’s concern…for all of her arguing it seems like the heroes can’t help but get into the crazy mood of the pirates, experiencing the charisma alright ;D, and then the bit with the meteorite from Vandal Savage maybe being another thing to investigate was a surprise, the reaction of the tyrant at that idea was priceless too, but given the end of the chapter who knows how this will develop. Moments later Vandal Savage is taken away and the Deckhands return with a bit of an “awkward” reunion between Batman and Ivy, Harley seemed way more “chill” about it but that’s to be expected as well XD, and while discussing what to do about the weapons that the megalomaniac had developed the boombox plays a song which makes Audrey aware of how her position of authority as a queen looks quite compromised from an outside perspective with the pirates having the authority over her and the country. It doesn’t help either that she just went through an immense betrayal from someone who she thought she could trust in Vandal Savage and is a tad bit paranoid while she herself doesn’t trust much in her level of control in this situation. So Wonder Woman asks her if she wants her and Batman/the Justice League to get the pirates out of Kaznia, as if they could’ve ehem ;P, but after thinking about it Audrey decides to not as her reputation is quite in a pinch if she admits her blunders at that moment and right then Franky arrives and the reactions are just peak towards the pervert, Jinbe also arrives carrying Orion which once again makes the position of the heroes shaky there since they said to be only those two there so yeah…awkward though with an apology it was all resolved while the New God is looking forward for a rematch against the Fishman now and so the heroes leave Kaznia with now the pirates having to make Audrey snap out of her paranoia which Brook is perfectly willing to do…by asking the current queen for her panties and getting hit to cam her down, typical but hey it did the trick ;D, and now looking forward to a concert of the Soul King as well the Straw Hats having an idea for it and start to rebuild Kaznia. And so said idea is planting those gigantic plants and the gigantic animals that they were planning for Wano onto Kaznia as a test, this being another reason as to why the Straw Hats decided to go through with it with Luffy bringing it on, well thank goodness that Audrey decided to keep the pirates around or she would’ve missed this opportunity for her people to get all of this when they really do need it as she watches how they actually are way more poor than she really knew much to her shame, that being seen by Ivy who is proud of her contribution to this, also showing just how much good she can do in actuality which is nice, while also frowning at Audrey’s ignorance of how badly her people truly had it with Nami however putting it into perspective for the dryad that in actuality the current queen is showing a lot of courage and good heart as rather than letting all of this be to another so she can continue to party without a care yet wants to be here to make sure that it all goes alright and accept responsibility in spite of the complications that could cause her, Ivy accepts this but then her doubts start to creep in again with Nami picking it up, so now wait and see to read how this will continue from here. While all of this happens Batman arrives at the Batcave with the members of the Batfamily waiting for him and to their surprise Diana is with him, oh boy there seems to be a new level of “comfort/familiarity” between those two after all of this perhaps? Bruce’s close ones certainly think so and we know it ;P, anyway he tells them of the situation as Savage has been defeated yet the pirates have technically won (the Justice League have a weird fixation in seeing this as a competition or that’s how it feels like, as in they’re happy here for the GREAT contribution that the pirates have made for Kaznia and all of the world really but they’re more worried them winning over the population…something they might want to look into in the future though likely more explored by the Cadmus arc, though Diana does note that to herself later too) with them having a country to operate while winning over the people thanks to their contributions which are being informed about internationally, I would’ve liked to see Farmer Brown’s and Emmylou’s reactions to their dreams becoming true like this, I bet they cried of happiness :3, and Bruce as well as Diana tells them about what they found out about Luffy and the Straw Hats as a whole while deciding to prioritize Aresia and Joker (they know about the clown having been killing and taking stuff from small criminals/super-villains and vigilantes) before dealing with them eventually as well as the farmer being also among their ranks and regaining more the hope of being able to end this “conflict” with the pirates peacefully (the funny thing is that Alfred may not be wrong about how offering Luffy food might do the trick actually yet he was ignored XD) Then to the surprise of everyone Batman reveals himself as Bruce Wayne to Diana, yep certainly getting comfy there ;D, while reaffirming that the pirates still need to face justice but hopefully a middle ground can be found while there are other priorities such a Aresia…the rogue Amazon that has been watching what happened in Kaznia and seems to have had some nefarious plan from it, well she seems ready to make her move and I’ll be waiting to read what it is but certainly not good. Back in Kaznia the Soul King is through his concert alongside “Phil Collins”, aka Clayface but man was I shocked when I read it before knowing the truth XD, with the people of Kaznia enjoying themselves through this party, such a “One Piece” feeling right here it made me very happy :3, and Audrey being glad for everyone as people dance around a bonfire at the rhythm of drums…just beautiful and awesome ;D, while still thinking to herself how she could really be betrayed again by her new allies with the people being all for them and the international politicians already denouncing her as a puppet of the pirates and other problems…as well as realizing that her father really wasn’t as beloved as she thought to say the least makes her worried about everything being onto her but Cheetah talks to her about how she treated meeting the pirates as a game and how for the time benign she should just be glad for her citizens as they’re happy and with bellies full and have a fun time herself leaving her with Maureen as well as Ace to “make peace with” as well as have fun together without drinking for the young ones even if Ace is allowed wine LOL…and moments later she gets introduced to the mythical danco of pulling chopsticks in your nose and mouth as she watches the powerful rubber boy doing it with others and Robin explains it to her seriously, just great stuff! To end the chapter we’re again in the Batcave with Diana and Bruce alone now as they still discuss what they learnt like “haki” being a thing, I guess that talking with Orion of his fight against Jinbe will make it clear even if they have an idea from the name’s translation to willpower and such, also being close to one another with Bruce letting his walls disappear around the Amazon princess while still wanting to convince to himself that a relationship wouldn’t work between them and they’re just friends…we’ll see how this continues for them going forward, as he safes the information in the Batcomputer and they leave however Talia al Ghul comes out to steal the information about the incident in Kaznia as well as the Straw Hats for some reason and then learns of that asteroid that granted Vandal Savage immortality, so yeah not good and as noticed by many it’s not her before Rash took over her body apparently, I wonder how she would react knowing this is what her father plans to do to with her, given the obsession for immortality from her, her dad and their group with something apparently better than the Lazarus…wait and see but the evil women from her and Aresia are ready for action apparently. So another great chapter in case that I wasn’t clear with this review ;P, I’m glad that the videos I’ve sent to you are of help as I indeed noticed content from them through the chapter. And a pleasure for me to help this “plot” about Audrey as well, thanks for all of your hard work you rock and I’ll be waiting for the next chapter! (I doubt it’ll come soon after two updates basically back to back but hopefully I don’t have to wait a lot for it either :D) |
22jward chapter 29 . 10/7 more please |
BlitzNeutral69 chapter 29 . 10/7 dear god... I wish there a reaction fic for this, this World Justice League reacting to the One Piece anime. Dear god I hope Batman fulfills his word and punches the world government faces... or at least attempt to. XD |
musizlover2008 chapter 29 . 10/7 It has been ages since I made that review with that joke, I thought you might have forgotten it. |