You know, you are one of the few authors on the site that do an exceptional job writing Luffy. Most people tend to boil him down to goofiness and only goofiness or for some reason obeying random strangers because they say "Do this or we won't be friends anymore". You capture the essence of luffy outside of his goofiness great, obviously it still happens in the background but for story purposes you capture Luffy's high EQ as well as natural charisma and leadership qualities very well. I enjoy reading your story. Can't wait for your next chapter.

Another excellent chapter! I like how Audrey pretty much literally ran into some of the Straw hats and how quickly she befriended them due to being a fan as well as Nami's "not this plot again" reaction to finding out that Audrey is a Princess. Another good part is the offers Audrey made to get the Straw hats to relocate to Kaznia and Vandal Savage's reaction to seeing them. I also like Luffy's reaction to seeing members of the Justice League and that Ivy made a small army of Harley Quinn clones.
Suggestions: Vandal Savage's millennia of experience using primitive weapons combined with his superhuman strength and healing factor might make him a decent opponent for Zoro, Chopper has been in correspondence with Rick Tyler and Doctor Charles McNider (Dr Mid-Nite) using the name Antony Hiriluk, Nami has stolen Weather Wizards tech and had integrated it into her Clima-tact,

So a thought occurred to me, every earth in the DC Multiverse has a number ie; Earth-12, Earth-50, and the one the straw hats currently inhabitant Earth-508.

And that got me thinking what number would the straw hat's earth have? So, I decided to assign one myself and I went with Earth-561108743 interference to how the straw hat's Devil Fruits follow a kind of pattern using goroawase

Viendo como va todo. Seria interesante que al fin terminen llegando con dr fate y por algo la liga de la justicia obtenga un trozo de ropa de Nico Robin y hagan que fate o zatarra use un hechizo para ver el pasado de robin y vean la destruccion de Ohara.

Y por el lado de los ex-villanos interactuen con un artefacto que los haga ver el enfrentamiento de Zoro contra King.

Y mas aun que joker con the light hagan que algun artefacto recree al mayor enemigo que a enfrentado luffy creyendo que podra derrotarlo y sale una sombra de Kaido. Asi todo dc temblara y luggy usaria el gear 5.

Todo esto porquee encontre un par de ASMVs que estan epicos. Uno es 800 years, y el otro es Zoro king of hell.

A great chapter! I like your use of Amazo and that Cheetah help Franky, or rather "Tom Puffman", in touch with mad Scientists like Ivo. Another good part is the impact that Harley and her "therapy" have had on Mercy. I also like the further explanation of the non-crossover Strawhat's views on hero and justice as well as the "Boxing Lessons" for Superman.

can bring annie back the other part of clayface

when is luffy going to use Gear 5?

HUGE chapter with a lot of good stuff! That's also why this review is a bit late, there's a lot to cover.

Considering one of the main characters in Maid of Honour is a Princess, I already had a pretty good idea of how this was going to go. Nami even pointed it out herself, every time the Straw Hats meet a Princess, there's always a big fight that happens soon after. It's literally a pattern with them. It has to be. You can't say it's just a coincidence when they've met several different Princesses and there's always been a fight involving them and their lands.

As for Audrey herself, by the end of this I'm sure she'll become just like the Straw Hats other Princesses: Glad to have met the kind and powerful pirates despite knowing that they're all completely crazy. However, I also think she'll also have a new hatred of the Justice League at the end of this as well because of Orion. I don't know exactly what he'll do, but I'm sure it'll be something that doesn't look good for the rest of the Justice League.

Vandal Savage. If there was ever a time he wished he wasn't immortal, I think that time is about to come. I can picture all kinds of things happening to him and that's if the Straw Hats never find out what he did to another version of Luffy. If that happens, then I don't think even his immortality will be enough to save him. Actually, that's probably why he sent that warning to his past self. I must admit though, I love the fact that this terrifying immortal dictator is so clearly scared of the Straw Hats. He'll never admit that to anyone including himself, but his thoughts when they first appear and some of his later actions prove that this power mad psycho is secretly terrified of our favorite pirates, or at least he's terrified of knowing how easily they can ruin his plans.

Speaking of plans, Joker's out and about killing lesser superheroes and supervillains and stealing their powers. He's almost like a totally different villain now. If it wasn't for the few goofy moments he still has I'd swear he's not the Joker at all. But he is and I've got a bad feeling about him getting his hands on so many powers.

Ivy also seems to have been struggling a bit before with her feelings towards the Straw Hats. However, Luffy seems to have gotten through to her if she's now leading an army of Harleys to help out with the small war that Savage just started. An army of Harley Quinns. Isn't that a terrifying thought.

The Justice League has also finally discovered the Royal Flush squad and learned about their escape, or rather their liberation by the Straw Hats. Then Wonder Woman goes and uses that information to make Ace and Queen distrust them even more then they did before. "Only just today!" I know it's true but if I were in their shoes and heard that I'd swear it was a lie. The others will probably think the same.

Ace and Maureen were also a really good team with Ace stunning the attackers while Maureen froze them and their ride. I know Ace is already very powerful but Maureen's no slouch either. She actually makes me think of a female Shoto Todoroki and I think she has the potential to be just as powerful as he is, if not even more so.

Lastly, my favorite moment from this chapter? Nami stealing the Mona Lisa. I know she put it back but still, great moment.

Keep up the awesome work!

more please

I really loved this two parter, even if the idea hurts my heart. Still, it would be interesting to read like an AU version of this idea were Zoro was the only one who survived and turned into a sorta samurai Punisher. Edgy, I know.

Okay so Sanji saying that Darkseid could serve THEM if he was strong enough had me putting down my tablet so I could laugh for a good 5 minutes. The gentleman/tuxedo mask is like... *chef's kiss* pun intended.

You know, I always found it weird that Supes is so disbelieving that Braniac is back because, yeah, you've seen him destroyed. Multiple times at this point. Clearly the idea shouldn't outside the realm of possibility. Also, I'd actually be totally cool with that sacrifice to destroy Darkseid.

Awwwww, I'm glad Amazo found himself better role models! He'll still be doing crime but, like, better crime than. What Lex would have had him do. Usopp singing was my favorite part lol. He and Brook should do a collab.

Great chapter! It's always fun to see the ladies having a night out. I support Women's Wrongs! Also, it was fun help develop the outfits with you.

You don’t have to answer this, just want to comment on how Batman got Luffy all wrong. They don’t respect him for his power, they’re his nakama. The fact that Batman never met a criminal like Luffy is really making him make some assumptions, and the wrong kind. It’s hilarious!