Daphne has blonde hair. Pairing with Tonks and Fleur is creepy. Cougar in a bad way creepy. Maybe 10-15 years down the road but not before then because, gross.

I m going to miss this story since it seems that you don't intend to complete it. :-(

This is such a promising story. Can you please please start updating it and continue again.

Please update this story? I love it; it's awesome.

Great story line.

Constructive criticism, I've noticed a few spelling errors (ex. Thrust where trust should be). I noticed you haven't posted anything for several years and am hoping that you aren't finished with your story.

Wow the cliff hanger that is this story wish I never read it now I can only be disappointed

You need to conquer the English language before you can conquer the world, mate

Well, hopefully, Harry and Co. can work on Ginny so she's not just a puppet living the life her Mother dictates instead of her own

Nice~

Nice~

I am truly sad that this story has been abandoned it was looking to be on par with some of the outher great story's I have seen. O well I'm sure life happens.

So, it seems to be the end of such an interesting story. I am a big fan of harem stories, and this one is one of the greatest one i've got to read this far. Yep, there are some issues, like not-so-perfect grammar, some typos, and so on in technical part and making some of not worst characters really antagonistic(I am talking about Snape and Ginny, it looks a little strange.). But, still, it seems to be one of the best. Well, it WAS, because i don't believe in update after three years. So, F to pay respect.

My only complaint is that daphne and hermione were upset at Harry for having fun and being a kid. Why should he have to wait till they are around to do so. He has never had Christmas or played or made a snowman. I wish he said something like if your around when I have a project I’ll include you sometimes. Because even if they are around maybe he wants to do things on his own. House Potter business shouldn’t be shared with just anyone. And Harry needs to say no sometimes. Hermione asked about his mail and he should of simple said I’m smiling because of what’s in the letter obviously or just I was given good news. I hope Harry doesn’t give in all the time. He’s entitled to privacy and secrets. Harry doesn’t demand to know everything about them and their families etc. I really like this story though. I’m confused about Harry not checking Molly’s sweater for tracking spells etc. He doesn’t know her and that she sent a gift is suspicious. More chapters please.

really enjoying this can't wait to see what happens next!