Reviews for Potter |
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![]() ![]() Truly enjoyed this story. Sure, there are a few mistakes here or there, but I was captivated by it, read all 7 chapters in one sitting. Would love to see it continued. |
![]() ![]() While it seems that you are still active you have not updated this in some time which is a shame as i was looking forward to seeing your plots reveal themselves |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thx. Hope you get your muse back for this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() gods please more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aura does work well for such a majestic owl... But Saint Hedwig was the patron saint of orphans which I also thought was a nice touch because of who her human was... She sometimes seemed almost motherly to him... Well as motherly as an owl can be to a human... |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story would love to see more but it seams you've let this one go un updated in 3 years shame. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Three years and no updates, this is sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It looks like it is an allusion to Jon Snow from A Song of Ice and Fire. I love muffins especially blueberry and chocolate chip. |
![]() ![]() could be far better if you were a little better at English. |
![]() ![]() I read this without looking at the date last updated. Then I checked your page. Have you ever actually completed a story? Not trying to insult you or anything, just honestly curious if you just bounce around from idea to idea. I have the same issue. |
![]() ![]() I’d like to point this out, since this whole site spends more time bashing the Weasley’s than it does giving them accurate portrayals: Ginney was a little kid. A parent asking a child where something is even if the parent already knows where the place or object is is common. It’s a teaching mechanism. Writers on this site tend to pick that one interaction and infer that the whole Weasley family (or Ron, Molly, and Ginney) are evil and are trying to find Harry. This is such a huge leap in logic that it deserves to be addressed. |
![]() ![]() Hello, Muffin Lord! I have to say I love your story a lot, and I would hate for such a amazing potential to go to waste. I would so much love it if this story was continued, it's of course your story but I just wanted to let you know how I would feel if this was continued. If it was continued, I'd like to tell you what I would want this story to go to. First and foremost, Arthur finds out about what Molly is planning. This results in a divorce and Ron and Ginny are also cast out. The Ex-Weasleys then become nobody as the Prewett family refuses to take them in. The horcrux in Harry's scar is gone because he was blessed by a "Pure One". Dumbledore and Snape's intentions are shown to the world and everybody finds out about the true "Albus Dumbledore". The Goblins then find out about the other horcruxes from Harry's scar horcrux. The Goblins and Harry destroy all the Horcruxes and Voldemort is dead. Happy Ending! This is how I would like this story to go but if you have something different planned(which you probably have), I would love to see what you have planned. Please continue! |
![]() ![]() I just stop read it this stupidity, first the dumbass machiavelic show you portará it is just stupidity comino from a child and not and adult. Second now snaperapist is fond of harry. Thank good it is dead. Stupid MoRon |
![]() ![]() ![]() dang this is really good shame you didn't continue it :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! Tonks! I love her personality. |