Reviews for Potter |
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![]() ![]() I do hope you write at least one more chapter for this story. As I was giggling in Glee at the end of the chapter. |
![]() ![]() I love this story. Please update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story so far, but so are the rest of yours and given the last update date I don't hold much hope for this to be updated soon. And while I wouldn't mind I also admit that I won't be overly sad if the other get updated instead :) |
![]() ![]() I hope you write more of this. I can't wait to see what harry gets from being blessed by the unicorn |
![]() ![]() ![]() It has been three years since the last update. And looking forward to future updates and this story is finished. And Dumbledore and all the Death Eaters getting what is due them And I hope Harry gets all the stolen funds to do him back. And I hope A simple washing of the Sweater being enough to remove all the Portions that Molly soaked it in would be enough to get it removed. Plus I would limit who handled his laundry and his food. So as to avoid illegal potions. Plus I hope Arthur finds out about what Molly and Dumbledore are up to and what Molly did to him in the beginning so as to marry him. And as a result, Arthur files divorce and tries to straighten our hi to youngest and his third oldest because of Molly Plus I hope with Harry's lawsuits Lockhart is never hired as a teacher at the school because he is a fraud and Harry with the aid of the goblins was able to expose him for the fraud he is. Plus I was thinking that the Willingly given Unicorn blood would protect Harry from the Horcrux in his scar. And maybe with the Aid of the Goblins and any house-elves can remove the Horcrux from the Scar. And have Madam Amelia Bones and Madam Longbottom as witnesses. Where then that removed Horcrux is used to locate all the Others. Where them The Goblins team up with the DMLE and The Unspeakables to locate the Others then Destroy them all at once. And they have a recording device to record the fact of the collection and destruction of those Abominations. Which they can be broadcast threw out the whole of the Wizarding World along with reported in all of its newspapers and news magazines. Them all they would have left is Tom's wraith to deal with unless the Horcruxes could be used to locate Tom in his wraith form for capture and distribution. The sooner he is dealt with the better. And the sooner Dumbledore and Snape and all the Dark faction can be dealt with. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hate accents. I prefer correct English I would just indicate that the person was talking with an accent and what that accent was based on regarding regional organs. Such as Scottish, Irish, Welsh English and part of England and level of education and location of England. Cockney is one accent that's hard to make out and usually of individuals who are under-educated. |
![]() ![]() I love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this story. It’s very good! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() again i think somethings are lost in translation as hoax is the wrong word to make the sentance make any sense i think the word your looking for is joke instead of hoax, apart from silly things like that this is a great story so far and im looking forword to reading more thanke you |
![]() ![]() ![]() when going to a school or an event that invites people the word you should be using is attend and not assist which means to help with something theses words are totaly different and not interchagable, at least not in the english language as im reading it in |
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![]() ![]() I hope you come back to write more of this. I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful please if possible do more |