Reviews for Potter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please don't leave this on a cliffhanger |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story. Awesome chapter 7 ending! I'm wanting to read the rest but it's not here! Please finish! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for sharing. I hope you find the time and inspiration to pick this up again. Will bookmark it in that hope. Kudos! -HE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update your story soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent fight scene. Gah .. now i have the urge to wait a few months before reading another chapter so I can have more than one at a time. Thanks for sharing your tale with us. ciao til next time |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this story is abandoned, but I wanted to say anywas: You must be beyond brain dead to write this and abandon it. What a joke. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're disgusting |
![]() ![]() ![]() What is a thrust vault? Idiot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why would magic be taught using theoretical formulas when most of the aspects would be physical or at the very least, extremely different per person, wand, and heritage? |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, Sharpclaw Bloodspiller, a most YOUTHFUL name |
![]() ![]() ![]() basic education is free in the UKthat's up to secondary or college depending on some other things |
![]() ![]() I had a good laugh at Harry's speech about how the purebloods should be granted the right to rule their society because their ancestors founded it centuries ago. That's just completely idiotic. Going by this ridiculous logic we should put the old nobility back in power all across the world. Seriously from what kind of backwarded country are you to believe this kind of crap ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK so far so good i gues so long he dont become a fucking pussy of a beta bitch and a pushover then cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() hello, I have just finish reading chapter 7 and I really want to see more. Can you continue this story? |
![]() ![]() There are a bunch of grammar errors in this chapter. Missing words, words of the wrong tense, just flat out wrong words, etc. if reads like someone forgot to proofread this and only barely paid attention to the Microsoft Word editorial marks. Add into this the standard overly involved “greater good” Dumbledore and you get a story that just isn’t worth reading. |