Reviews for Potter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks 4 the chapter! |
![]() ![]() I really liked this story and wish you would pick it back up. The snowman from chapter 6 I would say made me think of Calvin and Hobbes but the attack of his snowman had 2 heads. TuxedoMac |
![]() ![]() ![]() Apart from been dead, the story really only show stupidity on must of the moron plus the worst and poor stupid rapist Snape and the real king of bullies dumbass. As it Is dead and full of crap it Is a bad story |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was what he was currently doing. He had his Transfiguration book opened and he was reading the first chapter, which was an introduction to the basics of transfiguration. While he was going to be seeing that after lunch, it never hurt to read ahead to have a gist of what the Professor was talking about. It was a good habit he had fallen into when he had to spend hours confined to a cupboard. It was going to serve him well in the years to come. What the hell did he do with all the time between his trip to Diagon and now. He should have finished all his books by then since he doesn’t have chores and has no friends. All he can do is read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Their eyes widened. "How did convince a goblin to do that?" Harry's smile strained. "A monthly salary of 200 galleons plus interests within al business under the Potter name." What a dumb ass. Giving away a fortune and ownership in businesses just so he can invest!? It’s HIS money! Sickening. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did a reread. really hope that the real world will give you time and the mojo to complete your story. Lots of fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() dang its over. |
![]() ![]() Shame that this story only has 7 chapters because so far it looks very promising |
![]() ![]() ![]() Extremely well done! Your excursions from canon made more sense than JKR's version. Thank you and I await your next offering. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the story so far. I would love to read more about Harry’s vision of Magical Britain and his time at Hogwarts. Great work. |
![]() ![]() I didn't care but for the changes, but was more angry at the abused dog by Harry cousin who haven't been punished for harming Harry and innocent animals. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was going good |
![]() ![]() ![]() really, really enjoyed this. Just found this and read it through. Been a while so I'm assuming that life happened and the tale has paused. While unfinished it's still a satisfying read. Hopefully you'll find time to pick it up again- it would be wonderful if this was finished. Thank you for your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has been great! Looking forward to seeing what you have next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, I kinda see Ginny as the victim here because she is being brainwashed. So it wouldn't be fair to 'bash' her (Which I think is cliched), plus I kinda like her and want her to develop a natural relationship with Harry |