Why change Hedwigs name to Aura? Was just so unnecessary and honestly fucking dumb like why? It’s like those fics that change Harry’s name to something else for no reason

Hey, my birthday too! I'll have a muffin too.

I like your comments. Also I could just skip them.

Corn bread muffins with meat? So, chili baked into a corn bread muffin?

You are late! epic!

Your spelling will improve and while my spelling is better my storytelling is NOT.

Should they get a teacher for the "club"? I thought they needed one but that may be from fandom.

I'm wondering if Harry will be unhappy with the amount of time quidditch practice takes from his studying. I'm enjoying your story very much.

Sending virtual chocolate for your muse and wishes for good health to you and yours.

No, (expletive)! They didn't take the boats again, in JANUARY, because NORTHERN Scotland would be two to three feet under snow AND the lake is FROZEN!
They probably had to spiked snow shoes on the the straps (and really, the straps ARE reptilian and skeletal looking, meaning cold blooded and no extra fat to keep warm. How do THEY even function in the winter? They should either migrate, or hibernate. Maybe they drink firewhiskey like the Abraxans from Beaubatons?

The second half of this last chapter is waaaaaaaaay better than all the rest. Ghost-writer? Beta? Er, magic?

Cloak or not, opening the DOOR should have triggered both Augusta's wards and let the house elves know something was up.
I'm not buying the 'featherlight charm means there are no footprints' bit.

(horrible, incouragable joke)(adapted, it used to be about Michael Jackson)
Do you know what JC Penney and Dumbledore have in common?
They both have little boys pants half off!

Just to spit.
What?
Seriously. What is that?!

...she wouldn't want to assist the feast.
ATTEND- GODZ DAMMIT!

Awww! Flitwick is cool. Don't make him the fainter.

How can a person get 'assist' every single time 'attend' is the right word? It baffles. Attend class. Attend detention.
If this is a second language, you need to put that in your header. No one will complain if it is. Heck, I can't write three words of a different language.

... wouldn't be able to do ANYthing about it.
'Nothing' makes a double negative. You will get killed, or worse, expelled.

This story is good.
The writing is horrifying.

"Crimson and red locomotive". Really?!
Please look up crimson.
You may be shocked.(hint: the train is crimson and black)

Plus, if anything, I'd say the train was more scarlet than crimson. Crimson and white are the U. of Alabama colors. Scarlet and Grey is Ohio State. Crimson is darker than scarlet. That train is about the brightest freaking shade of red I've seen. (and Go Bucks!)

that will ATTEND Hogwart's with us. Not assist. that's the second time

Piers Polkiss.

Burmese Python.

I'm getting to where I want to THRUST a sharp stick into my eye, if you don't stop misspelling 'trust', 'Trust' Account's, and the like.
Now, if Hedwig eats a THrush, crunch away. If Harry gets THirsty on THursday, chugalug! I'm not unreasonable!

You FEEL me with happiness, too!

The phoenix noise was a 'trill'. You are killing me.

Vernon 'lunches' too much as it is. Maybe LAUNCHING off the couch will burn a calorie or two.

No, his accounts would NOT be “absorbed” (i.e., STOLEN!) by the bank while he was unable to use them as a little kid, FFS! They wouldn’t just be sitting idle, either! If nothing else, they would be busy making interest!

Awesome Story so can't wait for more.
Thank You.