I tried reading this a few years back and enjoyed it up until this chapter. I could never see Yang in the VSS. I thought Id give it a chance to see if I changed my mind. Once again Yang in the VSS feels like a stretch but Ill try to finish it this time.

I read the whole thing in 2 days, i loved it! i was expecting Jaune to awaken his semblance at any point with all the hardships he was going through. oh well

Wonderful story! I enjoyed it and look forward to reading more of your works! 10 outta 10! Wish we got to see more of Magician (Velvet) though. Once again good work!

Kickass story thank you for writing and sharing!

I can't believe this thumbnail predicted The Black Silence from Library of Ruina at least 2 years before its initial release.

Story had it's flaws but nonetheless was good, solid 7/10.

A summary I made to congratulate this story.

What does it mean to live in blissful ignorance, with the untold amount of dangers just around the corner? How is one meant to lead their life with the realisation that their existence can be snuffed out by those more dangerous and powerful that others do not even know exist? Those who are a danger to the people must be snuffed out, to maintain the peace of the innocent, and the ignorance of those unwise to not incite panic. There must be those individuals who are willing to give up their very lives to destroy those who intend to destroy the undeserving, with no public recognition or glory. It is a game of life and death, where one wrong move will mean it is all over. Only the strongest of wills and the most cunning can overcome the unseen foe, succeeding in protecting those they have sworn to watch behind the shadows.

Good ending. It felt open to new ventures but resolved for immediate concerns. Also Watts would've been amazing for all the counter-spy stuff that could've gone down, but Cinder fitted the role as something so forceful the VSS couldn't just snatch her up and silence her. Overall while not the bedt story you've written, it felt real in many good ways.

Hopefully this leads to cinders long awaited 'fall' lmao I regret nothing lol

Was hoping that jaune would complain to Roman about the ball shots he took from ruby...would make a funny conversation lol.

Wait. Ozpin and Oobleck are obviously dead. And here you say Goodwitch perished too. That leaves... Dear God, is Beacon academy now under the leadership of headmaster PORT?!

Doesn't matter how much sense it makes, it's still a dick move lol

qrow's line of "they're hust sitting there talking" reminded me of red vs. blue season 1 episode 1, and it's freaking hilarious, I understand that you probably didn't have that connection in mind, but to me, it clicked, and i love it.

Aaaaaa...Cardin...sniff

Nooo, CARDIINN?! He from all people?! NOOO