| Reviews for In the Kingdom's Service |
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  Guest chapter 27 . 7/31 Yes we get it you're a simp without a backbone, please keep your barely disguised fetish out of the story. |
 KatyaINeedToKnow chapter 8 . 7/23 Predicting that Magician is Velvet and Vanguard is Cardin. |
| Astra Starfield chapter 6 . 7/3 Loving the story so far but i wish his codename was rabbit. Like his hoodie he has |
| Cooldude101011 chapter 56 . 5/14 Rip Winter, at least she went out swinging. Poor Coco though. |
| Cooldude101011 chapter 45 . 5/14 Damn, I guessed right that Velvet is Magician. |
| Cooldude101011 chapter 21 . 5/14 Magician is Velvet isn’t she? |
| goldenooreos101 chapter 1 . 4/3 VSS... wait a minute... SSV! the SSV SR-1 Normandy stealth frigate is an experimental ship co-designed by the Systems Alliance and the Turian Hierarchy. The Normany's state-of-the-art Internal Emission Sink (IES) system allows it to function without detection for hours on full operation, or days while drifting. The SR-1 also comes equipped with the Tantalus Drive, a Mass Effect core twice the standard size for frigates. The TD is capable of generating a Mass Effect field so strong that the Normandy 'falls into', allowing it to move behind enemy lines without using sublight propulsion. |
| A Sole Reviewer chapter 16 . 2/8 I can see why Jaune did this and it looks there will be a lot of consequences. I'm hoping the will learn from this and not do it again. I look forward to seeing Jaune learning what really his job is about. right now his dream is childish. |
| HorribleDriver chapter 57 . 2/4 Man, this fic was an emotional roller coaster. In other words: it was the best! |
| HorribleDriver chapter 57 . 2/4 Man, this fic was an emotional roller coaster. In other words: it was the best! |
| MLG Samantha chapter 18 . 12/13/2022 You forgot to add in Penny's hiccups when she was lying. |
| MLG Samantha chapter 13 . 12/11/2022 Well that whole talk about not knowing how to talk to people in the middle of this chapter hit way too close to home. I think I'm gonna go drink myself to sleep now. |
| MLG Samantha chapter 5 . 12/9/2022 I came here after reading Captain Dragon, and I was kinda hoping it was in a shared universe with this fic. Honestly the VSS reveal in that seems like a complete ass-pull otherwise, and I now know it is otherwise what with having the differing teams from canon. Why can't you ever do a fic where the teams are the same as in canon for once? There's plenty of ways to mix it up a bit, like you could have Jaune be partnered with Ren instead of Pyrrha for instance. The secret agent premise of this adds even more possibilities. |
| Superjukes chapter 32 . 12/9/2022 lmao |
| Superjukes chapter 29 . 12/9/2022 nevermind, torchwick is a b*tch |