Reviews for Forever Bleeding
onlyalegend chapter 1 . 7/17/2017
Oh, good job with the angst! This is definitely chilling! The way you remarked "blood. Pure blood" felt right and even more tragic as of course Draco would have never expected his blood to be shed. Same with "magic. Dark magic." It's all very atmospheric and somehow surreal, which is very fitting since he's on the verge of death and probably feeling like floating too. This is a great poem and a heartbreaking story. Good job, well done!
PS. You should definitely check out the forum, The Golden Snitch.
Maisie Malfoy chapter 1 . 7/16/2017
OMG this was absolutely beautiful! I have to say I didn't expect it to be up this fast or a poem, but I love, love and love it. It's just so dark and so beatiful!
Thanks again :)