Hey, very enjoyable story so far, I enjoy this portrayal of Shirou and the Uruk Family Bash overshadowing a lot of the 4th grail war and these three terrifying the other masters seems fun.

Just one point, in the stat chapter for Shirou, he was noted as the First Mortal King. Wouldn't Regent be a better title for him, as he was never really the king, but only conducted affairs while Gil was away?

Hoping for a chapter soon!

I had tried this story before, but found myself turned off by the happy-go-lucky nature of Kidgamesh. On second attempt, I found this much better. It is an interesting concept. I look forward to seeing where you go.

This is a very interesting story, nice work.

Shirou x Enkidu

First, I absolutely love this story. It's very well written and incorporates Gil as both his arrogant self and a version of him that's new, tempered by Enkidu and Shirou. I'm curious if you will do something with Arturia in the future mainly because I'm a hardcore Shirou/Arturia shipper. But also because I could see the generally selfish Shirou being interested in her and that leading to Gil going after her to give to his beloved brother who has never been one to want anything. It'd add up to an interesting and convoluted set of circumstances. I'm also curious as to Shirou and Enkidu's wishes considering to be summoned is to have a wish. Anyway I hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I enjoyed reading it and I can't wait to see where you'll take the story next.

-Genesis09

Deberías poner un poco del cambio que iso Shirou al convertirse en hermano de Gil, como por ejemplo, que un maestro hablé de su participación en la leyenda, otro punto que tienes que aclarar, si Shirou murió primero no sería el primer Espíritu Héroe en ir al Trono? Es pero lo aclares. ;)

Espero el próximo capítulo me parece una idea muy buena espero ver cómo sigues con la historia. ;)

It's 7 vs 6 vs 2 not 7 vs 7...

...unless they're fighting themselves?

Well, Archer IS trying to kill himself so I guess it's 7 vs 7 for him.

Shirou x Ereshkigal

Gudao!

awesome

This is just really interesting and I can't wait for more. Please continue

A well done chapter. Nicely done with the aftermath of all the servants meeting as the Masters decide on a course of action as well as what it is they must do next in order to win, but it would seem the Servants also have their own goals and objectives. It was also good to see the relationship the servants and masters have as some didn’t seem to trust each other and others are more like tools to reach an end goal for themselves. It would seem Shirou is ready to fight and will be going all out. Can’t wait. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

Can't wait for the Kings Banquet. The first time watching that episode I just thought Rider and Archer being jerks but after watching UBW and how Archer became him I understand Rider declaration. It's fine striving for an ideal but don't let consume you. And I wonder what will Shirou input on Saber ideology of Kingmanship since Shirou is considered 'The First Mortal King.' I believe Shirou ideology will be a combination between Rider and Saber ideology. A King is not a Ruler nor Saviour but a Guider or Creator. They must Guide their Kingdom to a better tomorrow.

Huh, I do wonder if there's anything going on in the Underworld between Shirou and Ere-chan. To be honest, I like Ritsuka and Ere-chan better but this is fine too. Question, will there be extra classes here in this war? If what Shirou has implied is anything, the Grail might summon Ruler because of the irregularity. Or maybe not, it might not be to that level. Anyway, will be waiting for the next update.