Reviews for Unshackled Route |
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Mugen-Blade chapter 1 . 10/22/2017 Bullshit. There isnt an infnite number of Zelretchs and even if there were the Human Order is perfectly able of killing them. It already turned and infinite numberof timelines into something finite. Shirou lost everything during the fire leaving him as a blank slate. All his desire to be a hero came from the borrowed ideals of none of the Prism Illya Shirous are gunho about being heroes. One is like a dense harem MC and the other couldnt care less about being a hero and his only worry is his 's statement about Shirou is nonsense. Even if EMIYA killed Shirou, nothing would have happened. That pharadox plan of his is nothing but something born out his desperation, a fools errant that will never work for many reason, one of then being that the Throne is isolated from the time space of the multiverse pharadox will do nothing to erase someone from there and even if its posible Alaya wouldnt allow it. |
Mystic the Kitsune chapter 5 . 10/8/2017 I seriously feel like Shirou will accidentally become the King of Urk leading to a deep resentment from Gilgamesh to him. Even if unattended. |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/4/2017 Now this is a fanfiction I partake interest in. It's very unique, I like it. I've also been wondering if Gilgamesh is aware of his older brother being adopted or not. If he has not a clue, then it would be an... exciting scenario to read. You did well! I like the plot and story, I wish to see more future chapters! |
Stereborg chapter 1 . 10/5/2017 Woah there |
PasiveNox chapter 5 . 10/5/2017 Hmm demon hahah |
PasiveNox chapter 4 . 10/5/2017 Great hahahahaha :) |
zachary2 chapter 5 . 10/5/2017 Holy moly. This is a great story, and the writing is very nice, and I like what you've done with Shirou, but I'm left with a question. Will Shirou change the fate of Gilgamesh? Or shall the story follow the Epic Poem, and shall only feature Shirou without him influencing major events? |
Roland Tepes chapter 5 . 10/4/2017 This was an awesome chapter. Please keep up the great work. |
sonic chapter 5 . 10/2/2017 I liked the chapter! |
Hipoisthabest chapter 3 . 10/3/2017 Ah yes, insurance before insurance was invented :U |
Shizuka-naru Goketsu chapter 1 . 10/3/2017 I wonder if Zelretch hangs out with Rick because that line " .. there is an infinite number of me .. " seems like something they'd both say. |
PasiveNox chapter 3 . 10/3/2017 It’s great |
piddle chapter 5 . 10/1/2017 good chapter |
superpeirce chapter 5 . 10/1/2017 I'm really curoius on how Shirou's legend will be seen as and if he will be more famous than Gilgamesh and when I mean that I mean will people in the modern day actually know of him where as Gil is barely remembered by society. |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/1/2017 I wonder if Shirou's presence has rubbed of Gilgamesh. When Gilgamesh finally has Humbaba beat, Humbaba begs for his life. Is this a pathetic move on the part of a monster? Not really. See, Humbaba isn't technically a "bad guy." He doesn't just hang in the Cedar Forest threatening everybody because he's some kind of selfish ogre who wants the trees all to himself. Basically, his deal is that he was appointed by Enlil, the king of the gods, to be super scary and guard the Cedar Forest. That's right: he's just doing his job guarding the trees from humans who would like to cut them down. Anyway, Humbaba appeals to Gilgamesh's sense of mercy when he realizes there is no getting out of this one. Then he lays it on thick, saying he he'll become Gilgamesh's servant and cut down whatever trees Gilgamesh wants him to. Hopefully Gilgamesh will spare the guy and put him to work. Enlil probably put him there to prevent deforestation. Deforestation can have serious effects on air and water pollution, climate change, soil erosion, loss of biodiversity. And start planting trees 2 or 3 tree for every trees cut. |